The Sa'Dalarim
The Guardians
The Preservers
The Librarians
[Intro may change for better] [requesting editor/co-author][Dark is for Gore Only]
Princess Twilight Sparkle requested Princess Celestia an expedition group for the search of a temple in the dephts of the Everfree Forest, said temple is believed to be the birthplace of the elements of harmony as Starswirl the Breared states in his old journal, it was the only book that stated in where was created these powerful artifacts but the journal has writen something more, the creators weren't ponies... but Protoss.
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The story has great potential. But like you said you need an Editor.....and pretty badly at that.
3319707
My thoughts exactly. I like the precept, but my inner grammar nazi is trying to detonate my eyeballs.
Ponies vs protoss interesting has potential I'll be watching
3319707
3319796
Yes I know
I really need one. 
3319847
Well, I planned some confrontation between them
3319849
As i read through the story i was making mental changes to grammar so my mind would not dissolve into a mushy mess.
All joking aside, if you want i can do your editing for you. I would be a Co-writer but i'm not big on the whole Star Craft side of the story. Sorry
3319899 Let the starcraft stuff to me and you the editing, 'kay?
I really appreciate your help 
3319936 No problem. One quick question, how are you going to send me the rough draft?
3320262 I can send it you by email. tell me your email by PM on this site.
in the meantime, can you edit this chapter?
HELLO STARCRAFT CROSSOVER!
And with my beloved Protoss!
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Holy Tassadar, this needs editing... Oh, I see you have one signed up.
Well, I suppose you should add this to the...
GLORIOUS STARCRAFT FAN GROUP! (Once it's legible, that is, sorry)
For a second, I thought this was going to get too close to the idea that I've been formulating for 3 months. If it gets anywhere near my idea, I'll-
Oh no, all out of time. If you need help on lore, ask me!/ writing Starcrafts, Ask me as well. I'll be happy to help.
3320910 Good, I might need your help with some aspects of the protoss. like the political and ruling ranks.
Also, the story is added to the starcraft fan group, I thought it wasn't active anymore.
3320983 There's been some activity... and some turbalance, but I'm hoping to start it back up, with what you soon shall see.
I can't help but notice not all of the grammar mistakes are fixed...
I can offer my services :)
-Powers
3322564 Good! I really need an Archon now
Please tell me your email via PM, another editor would be good
You need a better editor.
This story's getting better and why did you mention the Zerg in one of Daring Doo's books
3337641 I didn't mentioned the zerg
yet...
Then why in chapter two in some book dash read it said Daring Doo was running from the Zerg answer me that
3338101 She was thinking in "the Zerlunnian" a Lesser Changeling Hive that Worshiped the Voice of the Darkness
and hasn't nothing to do in this story 
Oh
I'm curious as to why this version is unedited...
-Powers
3341391 what do you mean?
3341595
All the mistakes I corrected are still there.
And I corrected ALL of them, believe me. It took me 2 nights (not counting the night you sent it to me).
-Powers
3345750 then making a chapter from various editors is a bad idea. I'm sorry if I wasted your time
3346097
I think the point of having multiple editors is to have one correct it, then pass it on to the next, then to the next etc. until everyone has had a chance to look at it. Then it is sent to the author, who does the final checks and makes sure that the plot wasn't changed. If you have pre-readers, send the chapter to them and see how they feel, make some changes, then finally, publish the chapter.
-Powers
Looks good but could use improvement, I would have thought the heading would be "The Beholders" but oh well.
Rainbow is so gonna lose against that zealot
Good story. Dash is going to lose.
Rainbows gon get chopped to pieces!
Clean up on aisle 4, Dash is so dead.
I am readingit for the second time love, it and en taro Tassador
You must constructaditional Pylons
Everybody's thinking, "Rainbow Dash is gonna lose"
5429240 She will. Also I think this story is dead.
your pictures dont seem to be working just thought i would let you know.
5429240 She may yet win, however her wings would most likely pay the ultimate price for it.
MY LIFE FOR AIUR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please continion(more chapters)
Please resume this this is an awesome story he can't just leave it dead like this please start it again