This was the last time I would see the land that I could call my home. The Griffons, while a rather crude and brash race, had shown to have incredible compassion to those in suffering.
Now I would have to leave it, for a much more important task lay ahead of me, and two special fillies that I had to make sure arrived there.
Uh... this is really good but I'm not sure what exactly just happened.
"me"
3312480 DAMMIT!
That's kinda what happens when I literally just wrote words for almost an hour.
Basically, Celestia and Luna are about to embark to Equestria, where they can unite its people and begin their rule. The narrator is their guardian, and their father.
Needs an editing pass, but this is a pretty neat idea. You get a lot across in a short amount of time. :)
5147487 Alas, it appears the author is not around to make that happen. :(
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ah, dang, no wonder his stories keep showing up at the low end of my RIL :(