What happens when a minty unicorn finds a lost species in the Everfree forest?
How about if this species had advanced technology not seen for centuries?
Imagine this lost species holds the secrets of lost science and technology?
And suppose they learned all they knew from an even more ancient race?
This takes place during season three since I conceived the story line before S3
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Interesting. Have my like and fav and I'll be eagerly awaiting more.
Human✓
Lyra✓
Non Mary Sue Twilight✓
+Tiny little fuffy ponies ✓
Only thing left uncheck is keeping writer alive. This kind of writers keep disappearing.
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I assure you, I won't fall off the edge of the earth like so many others. I been planning this, especially after almost all the stories I follow haven't updated in months...
Change the picture, zecoras curses, but change it! I got the picture up on da and in our chat so no excuses
Hoora, kicken flank and taking names
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Indeed
Ch 2, Done! there should be no spelling or grammar issues but if there is kindly let me know, thanks in advance!
Stop by here ( http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Sb129 ) to see how much I'm workin or slackin on the next chapter
You've definitely got me interested into whatever blazing grabbed, but the name listing threw me off a bit. Are all these characters going to be important? because that list is long and I can barely remember a single pony's name because of it (not to even mention which one did what). otherwise good job so far and I'll be eagerly awaiting further chapters
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I just listed names so I didn't have to keep saying them or they or the like, they will be mentioned from time to time if I have to reference 'some other flutterpony' i won't have to come up with names later (if that made any sense)
Unless there is a better way to do it, Idk, outside purely school projects (half of which I never finished) this is the first time I am writing just to write, so I'm still pretty naiive and winging it when it comes to storywriting, thanks for the fav btw (thx to all who fav'd)
*applause* ill uh, get those pictures out to you here quick *cough*
~Rewritten
Re-written, I guess re-worded would be a better choice of words
Hell yes, I love laser pointers!
so.... is there actually humans in this? or is this one of those stories that's tagged humans but there are no humans, just legends/stories of them?
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Don't you worry about that, they play a major role later, same as Twilight and the princesses
They're taking the Hobits to Isengard!
(dislike if you see something insulting i hid in the comment)
If there are going to be humans in this, then you're taking your sweet time getting there. Not that i don't like the story building, but i hope the human(s) get introduced soon. And judging by the random orange lights that might not be too far away.
4561287 Like I told that other guy, the humans have a major role to play, and actually, next chapter will be progressing more than the last few have...
They...
Are...
Coming!
4561278 and I don't see the hidden msg
I FEEL LIKE A WISE OLD MAN PASSING ON THE WAYS OF OUR PEOPLE.
Fuck me, take your time dude.
Good work on the chapter, even if it is a tad short. Glad to see you're not letting this story go, I've been waiting ages for the continue.
A laser pointer that can actually damage and explode stuff just as easily as highlighting a sentence on a board and still having the latter option as well? Gimme, GIMME, GIMME!!!!! I want one now!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn......you update like a tortoise!!!! Still, this chapter has pleased me!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for your next update!!!!!!!!
Since Black Friday will be done this week i'll have more off time to finish this chapter and maybe another.
It lives!
*CROWD CHEERS*
YAY!!! IT ALIVE!!!
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It has been a while.
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A while too long. One thing I do notice is that the word order in this story is a little weird. It still makes perfect sense, 100%. However it keeps the flow of the story nice and creative.
Sorry I don't update much, I have a busy day schedule, but it's summer and I'll have more time now, even if a little...
I like your style, it looks just as good if not better than the actual No-Logic , I regret nothing, And thanks a lot for that!
This story is great! Glad you're continuing it. :)
cool finally a new chapter!!!
of course. how cliche.
actually, dead languages can sometimes be easier to learn, as one of the most annoying things about language is it's constantly evolving. a dead language, on the other hand, is static and unchanging, thus making it far easier to learn as long as you can translate it.