Caramel is just a down on his luck stallion, struggling to get by. Today is his unlucky day though, as he's about to get firsthand experience of hell on earth.
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- Member Since 12th Jun, 2012
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electreXcessive
I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.
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Just the idea made me laugh out loud, at the mere memory of MCP's narration.
Liked and faved even before reading. Oh god, you just made my day.
3306192
Aye, this was inspired after listening to his narration of the original XD
3306198
I just read it out loud to my brother, and we shared a good laugh. That last line was awesome.
And now I need to go listen to it again...
4spooky8me
You just took the supermarket monster story and changed out the words...
then added a little bit to the end. Technically, this is plagiarism.
I give the last scene an upvote.
I'm going to try to forget I ever read the rest of it, though.
NOT THIS AGAIN
Alternatively, I had a good laugh.
Plot twist
Th story wasn't about Caramel...it was about me
But for realsies, this was just...
Oh my god. This is GOOD! I love it! :) good work!