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Twilight is again researching and that is going bite her right on the rear. She later finds herself in strange dream land. With a nightmarish "visitor".

Song fic. Takes place BEFORE the events of Friendship Is Magic.

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Comments ( 13 )

i liked this very good:twilightsmile:. though seeing as i not much of a writer i can't give you any tips or any thing like that :twilightblush: although i am writing a few things but none of which iv posted they are only ruf drafts. anyway im rambleing good job and keep up the good work:twilightsmile:
p.s first

I went to Youtube in search of this song.
I think the single comment on the video sums it up perfectly.
"Fucking sick."
Yes, yes it is.
Also, this fic is pretty awesome. There needs to be more Nightmare Moon.

Interesting and quite entertaining. This might make a neat story if you decided to expand it, though the song parts would need to go for it.

Nightmare seducing Twilight in her dearm, this has some really potional to become a great story. If you could maybe make into one please?

281649Dang it! Another request. :twilightoops:

If you keep it up I may have to give in on the pressure you give me :pinkiehappy:
But so far, I haven't planned any sorts of "sequels". Mostly because I intented this to be a simple one-shot. But we may never know :raritywink:

Hmmmm... I dare say I did enjoy this. A fun little scene, and could certainly fit in cannon. :pinkiehappy: Good job. :twilightsmile:

This was recommended to me.
Not bad, it was short, but I do believe that I spy a sequel.
Nothing jumped out at me while reading, but I did notice this:

could shook the very foundation

Shook is the past tense.
Shake would be a better choice in this instance :twilightsmile:
Other than that, good job.

2041725 Thanks. And the sort of a sequel is already made, although there isn't much of mentioning about what happened in this one-shot :twilightblush: it's called "Recalling the Nightmare" and my second FiM fan fiction.

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I'll check it out :twilightsmile:

This is one of my top favs love this would like more:heart::heart::heart::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

Would you happen to have a link to the song? I would like to hear it, but you tube won't give me the specific song.

6310650 Well, here is the link for the PMV I mentioned. And the song is called "Devil's Lullaby" and always, don't forget to comment and like the video (it certainly needs some). :derpytongue2:

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