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Concerned by how lonely Spike has been acting lately, Twilight decides to send him back to school for the day in hopes that he'll make some new friends. He won't just be learning pony history there, though - he'll also learn something about one particular pony's true self.

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i neverthought about it that way :pinkiesad2:

Unexpected ending, but good. I enjoyed reading this.

this is the first time I've ever seen anyone try to come up with an explination for these BG fillie's cuties. tablewear specialty, hmm...

You must construct additional chapters... Crap I mean Pylons...

Very nice work, liked it lots. Never thought of SilverSpike (New fanon name of shipping I just invented) as something, but now I do! Best wishes!

You have a mostly good start here, though the pacing feels a little awkward at times. I think you're trying to rush through the events too much.

This storyline has a lot of potential, but you've just barely scratched the surface here. It's like we're only seeing small snippets of what's going on.

I think this could be good with some more development, but right now, it feels way underevelopped.

I really like this story and it's a shame it's only a one shot, because this could be something truly great. Also that would be both an odd and unique shipping par of Silver Spoon and Spike. I have never seen that done before. She does fine metal work and he is a walking furnace, it almost makes sense. I thought the fic itself was well written and very d'awww. I'd give you all 5 stars if i could, but instead I'll give you a thumbs up.



Peace Out.

That was great! So Silver Spoon is not a mean filly after all :twilightsmile:

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Well, I am considering on adding a couple more chapters to it for further development. Should I change the status to "incomplete" or making them as a sequel? I know this is a personal preferences thing but I can't make up my mind.

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In this case, I recommend making it more chapters, myself.

294579 While I'm not a huge fan of mane six shipping, I think Spikexsilver spoon is a really cute one! (Ps I think Silke is good:twilightsmile:)

Woah...
Truly magnificent fic:heart:
I can't wait for next one :yay:
Keep up the good work!

I think that you should continue with this story. It's one of those stories that just sends a ball at you out of left field and makes you smile, because that ball is caught by your best friend who gets it signed for you kind of feeling.

Nice story. I like the character ineraction. You should continue it. :pinkiehappy:

Definitely needs more chapters. Good job mate. :twilightsmile:

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PLEASE do more chapters. If you do, you get a Red Angel Seal of Approval! If you don't...well, you'll get it anyway. But I won't feel as good about it. Oh, and add the Romance tag.

RED ANGEL SEAL OF APPROVAL

I love it when :moustache: goes to school!

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And after that Spike and Silver Spoon became bestests friends.
http://ed1229.deviantart.com/art/Commission-The-Lone-Dragon-432162679

Awww...I loved it.

Kinda reminds me of this little nice story.

Spike and Silver, sittin' in a tree......

Hello! I am very glad that I got to your forum. Our children are everything and we want them to get the most out of life. And this also applies to education, but this question is always acute for parents. Spikes are the best day at school, when all the children collect their collection of ponies and give them to their friends. But many parents are wondering about registering for elementary school. I searched a lot for material on this topic, but decided to order several articles on this topic at https://writingcreek.com/freelance-writing-jobs-new-york/, where I was pleasantly surprised. And of course I want to say that when choosing an elementary school, the opinion of the child should be taken into account, because he will study there for the next eleven years

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