Cameo

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A unicorn named Cameo without a cutie mark. Nopony ever pays any attention to her. Well, at least not until now...

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No One Important

No One Important #1 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · ·

I LOVE THIS! this is the honest truth it is perfect for anyone who is being bullied and just an all around good story. good job Applebuck!

AppleJackLovesApples

AppleJackLovesApples #2 · Oct 4th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Love the story and the lesson <3

CutieMarkCrusaders

CutieMarkCrusaders #3 · Oct 4th, 2013 · 1 · 1 ·

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Thanks, Paintednote! I'm glad you liked it!

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Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! I tried to emphasize the lesson as much as possible.

RainbowDash73

RainbowDash73 #4 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · ·

dont mean to sound judgemental but there ia a word missing that you need and quatation marks. <3 love ya

CutieMarkCrusaders

CutieMarkCrusaders #5 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · ·

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what word?!?!? it must be fixed!!!!

CutieMarkCrusaders

CutieMarkCrusaders #6 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · ·

3299781
Ok, I read the whole thing again and I didn't find anything.

RainbowDash73

RainbowDash73 #7 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · ·

ok i cant find the word anymore,maybe my eyes were playing tricks on me but the missing quotation marks should be here:The sad thing is, that even now that we are all grown up, I am still being bullied. I thought you all were better than this! <-------- no ending quotation mark.

CutieMarkCrusaders

CutieMarkCrusaders #8 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · ·

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thats how its supposed to be. when someone talks for a really long time, and a new paragraph is starting while they are still talking, there are no ending quotation marks, but there are at the beginning of the new paragraph. thanks tho! (that tripped me up to the first time i saw it)

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