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Two friends, Silver Storm and Rainy Days, go off to adventure in the Everfree Forest and find a hidden temple. For the sake of exploring, the two go inside, but alert an evil entity that is trapped within. They travel further in and discover the creature and its tools for hunting whatever poor soul wanders in. Will the pair manage to escape or will they be forced to succumb to what dwells within the temple.

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This has potential, and with some tightening up could have made a nice little adventure one-shot. However, as it stands the main characters don't really spark and the ending is uninteresting.

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