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Peace and Harmony have gone with the sudden disappearance of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. What followed soon afterward was an internal struggle to fill the void left by the regal sisters... and a gradual decline that plunged Equestria into an evil era of hardship and uncertainty.

All that is left now is a land ruled everyday by violence and death... with six factions competing against each other for supremacy of the land... and the annihilation of all others.

This is...Equestria Divided.

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Comments ( 34 )

8893191

Yeah sure, except this actually has edge to it! :rainbowlaugh:

8893191
More like the video game Shattered Union.

8893241

Man that game looks dope, I wanna play it! :pinkiegasp:

Hmm so I take it twilight never became a princess before the world went off the rails into crazy town I take it or did she become one but secluded herself away going crazy while trying to fix everything herself I wonder.

8893345

I'm thinking of making her an Alicorn in this story and just canon correcting it. Shouldn't pull too much away from the story I want to write. :twilightsmile:

8893365

Should be interesting and I have to admit I honestly wouldn't be surprised if winter was coming given I am already given a sense this is a dark world that is getting darker.

8893390

I won't spoil it, but there is a winter section of the story. I'm sure you'll like it, You should hit that tracking and follow button! :rainbowwild:

Man, I thought the whole Equestria Divided thing was as dead as disco. Glad to see someone still wants it to live.

8893670
Yeah, unfortunately it never caught much traction. Which sucks because it's such a good premise for a story.

I think part of the problem is the original created deleted his account and part because nopony has been able to actually write a good Equestria Divided story. I'm aiming to to write a good one by taking it slow and not going over-the-top right out of the gates like a lot of other Equestria Divided stories have done. :rainbowhuh:

8893670
I agree. Thank you, Rainb0w, for writing this. I look forward to it. Maybe I'll write one too. :pinkiehappy:

8893365
No offense, but personally, I think you should keep her a (mega-powerful) unicorn; it's how PoorYorick (the creator) made her for the universe.

8895530

I mean, like I said, I'm only thinking about it. And even if I do decide to make her an Alicorn and canon correct it it won't be a major detractor of the story's universe; so even if I do decide to tweak it then it shouldn't impact your enjoyment of the story all that much. :twilightsmile:

Looking forward to this universe getting a decent story.

8896893

Hell yeah man, hit that tracking button so you don't miss a chapter! :rainbowkiss:

8896408
She can't be an alicorn as the death of pinkie and scarring of dashie in her failed attempt to become one of the largest catalists equestrians descent to hell.

8896893
What about the pink samurai, it wasn't finished but it was very well done.

8893201
What about when Tony found out Bucky killed his mom, I will give you everything before that had little stakes but that final fight was epic

8898645

I'm aware of that, I have a few ways of writing around it. :raritywink:

It was a fine day in Ponyville.

Wait didn't Rainbow Flood Ponyville.

The rippled water reflected silver under the bright light of the sun as waterfowls swam on the surface. A duck quacked one or twice, and seldomly an article of clothing or piece of debris would float up, but never once did another pony re-emerge from the depths below.

Never mind

“Whoa Mommy!” Amber called out through the rain. “Look at all the pegasuses!”

It's the enclave.

Interesting start. You do a good job of setting the scene and expositing through Junebug and her daughter. It's clearly early in the timeline so I am intrigued to see where this goes. Thanks for the recommendation.

Before I read this, I must know: What happened to the Mane Six's faces?

8903551

You could follow the story and find out~ :rainbowkiss:

It's weird, I only hear about you for the first time at Whinney City, meet you at the vendor hall on the last day, and then just few days lager you're making a fresh, quality story for the niche fandom that's been wifh me since the first days I became a brony!

8906043

Equestria Divided has something special about it, that's for sure. I've been sitting on this story since I first found it uploaded on DA and It's a pretty cool feeling knowing that everypony is still thirsty for a good Equestria Divided story.

I hope I do everypony proud! :pinkiehappy:

You have my attention. Tracking!

The intro chapter has been revised, and it's 400 words longer than before! :rainbowkiss:

When/will there be a next chapter

9603874
Hey may I ask for your assistance in something?

8907269
Hey same for me my friend. But perhaps you like to form a co author ship or partnership perhaps?

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