Pokemon VS MLP

When Pikachu, Snivy, Oshawott, and Tepig are sent to Equestria. Things tend to get out of hand. Romance builds up, back stories are heard, and a lot of fighting. But will they be able to save the word before Wish Park takes over? The heroes of Pokepark must survive all they can, before it's to late.

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Chapter 1 · 5th Oct 2013 · 1,262 words
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Chapter 2 · 5th Oct 2013 · 3,462 words
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Chapter 3 · 6th Oct 2013 · 3,703 words
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Chapter 4 · 12th Oct 2013 · 4,815 words
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Chapter 5 · 27th Oct 2013 · 1,956 words
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Chapter 6 · 24th Nov 2013 · 1,809 words
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Chapter 7 · 3rd Jan 2014 · 1,288 words
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billahsaurus101

billahsaurus101 #1 · Oct 5th, 2013 · · · Chapter 2 ·

You have done an excellent job of setting up the lore of pokemon having a society away from humans, and introducing the relationships and personalities of each character. It does, however seem a tad rushed, with time or location jumps happening quite frequently. By the way, I'm very glad there are actual signs of time and location changes. It's an annoyance for me when stories don't tell you about a change of scene, thanks. As a pokeman fan myself I'm very glad to see each of the main characters casually discussing their moves and how they might accidentally cause damage to property and residents. I also feel you have done a good job with the battles, it has a realistic flow to it and is entertaining. I very much enjoy this Fic and would read more of it. Thankyou for writing this.

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