The Four Black Stars have returned.
Empress Celestia, worried for the future of her empire as an old evil descends upon it, calls upon her most faithful student, Twilight Sparkle, to find the reincarnations of six powerful warriors, each her weilded a spark of harmony that helped her seal away the evils during their first encounter. Twilight takes up the task... but she doesn't know where to start looking.
Follow the adventures of a student of the empress, a street performer with dreams of greatness, a half-foreigner aided by a powerful firearm, a bored noble's wife turned righteous thief, a quiet and loving druidess, and a circus clown with an unfortunate secret as they journey the land in search of answers to their own questions, and in doing so, deign to seek out each other.
(Written as part of NaPoWriMo, September 2013)
From what i read so far, it seems interesting. I'll make a point to finish it later.
Keep on writing good sir/madam.
EVERYPONY WAS KUNG FU FIGHTNING!!!
HUA HA!
THOSE MARES WERE FAST AS LIGHTNING!!!
>“You're certainly anal enough to be one,” the dragon quipped, earning himself another glare.
What I just read.
I like the idea, but you need to watch out for words like"fingers" or "fists"'. You said they had manes and fur coats, so these are obviously ponies. These words are detracting from the story.
Yet again, I find myself distracted. Are these ponies, or humans? If they're ponies, they don't have hands, and definitely don't eat meat.
I continue to love this story, but ponies horse riding? Also, I think you meant cut their hooves off.
I really like this story hope to read more soon
3488645 They're anthro. Mostly human, but with fur, ears, horns, wings, ect.
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I don't get it.
3507425 They're anthro. Mostly human, but with ponylike qualities such as wings and horns. Did you look at he tags?
Sorry for bugging you bit I was just wondeeing if you might be posti g the next chapter anytime soon???