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Bishibosh the Shaman


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Where do they go when they die?

Are they trapped in there like a cage?

Why take the others?

Why am I alone?

(World War Z based fic)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Dammit I pressed dislike! Stupid phone :(

3285688 tis all good, looks like its fixed now xD

Huh, this is looking pretty good, I'd really like to read more!:twilightsmile:
You may want to read back over and fix up your grammar a bit. Mostly just misplaced apostrophes where there isn't any shortening or ownership

3476837 I'm glad you enjoyed it, this was going to be a one shot unless it got more attention but I may pick it back up in the future. Keep an eye on it :pinkiesmile: And yeah, I have to do some editing on a few of my fics xD I'll get around to it eventually

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