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Jet Lignite

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In Equestria there has been long lasting harmony, and everything seems fine. However there is more to this than meets the eye. In the shadows, a new evil is patiently waiting to strike at its new prey. Soon this peaceful land will be the battle field of an ancient war between two legendary species that have not clashed in 70 million years...until now.
This the story of how everything has and will come to.
Twilight is going through a difficult time, not only about her destiny but a more personal termoil.
Strange occurencess happen across Equestria.
Familiar faces return
Will this be the end of Equestria as we know it?
Who can possibly save them?
Why is this description so cryptic?
The truth will be revealed.

(Content will most likely reach high levels, please read A/N for further information)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 38 )

Dis gonna be gud!!! If I may I would suggest that the villain have a moment such as the Didact in Halo 4 when he was revealed

. Trust me when I say this is praise for your story as The Didact is one of my favorite villains.:pinkiehappy:

3283312 Indeed. Also I hear that the didact is scheduled to be returning for the next two.

Is that a typo in the title? "Uninty"? Do you mean, "Unity"?
Perhaps not the best start...

Ahh, a fellow Spike. Welcome to being a writer and I can't wait to see what you have in store for Spike in your story. If your looking for a good Spike story how about trying my story, Legacy of Dragons and Knights.

Needs an Alternate Universe tag

3283529 I already have my friend :ajsmug: Thanks for reminding me. I especially liked the part with the theme from The Benny Hill Show :rainbowlaugh:

3283274 I've seen it and I guess it will be like that in a way. However you should know that after the main antagonist is revealed, things will get this intense. :rainbowdetermined2:

3284081 Mother of god... the shit will not hit the fan it will make the fan it's bitch.

3284009 Thanks it goes to know that other like my stories.:pinkiehappy::moustache:

3284806: :eeyup: Eeyup
Not only that, this one will be EPIC!:pinkiehappy: Booyah :rainbowdetermined2:

Comment posted by Jet Lignite deleted Oct 27th, 2013

I believe this would make a good theme for the cover art and for some future chapters. :rainbowdetermined2:

3405064 Patience my valued reader, the really good shit doesn't start this early in the story. Soon though... soon.

Did neo just... Die>>3406202

Like to see where this goes. Please continue!:moustache:

Neo? :derpytongue2: Such an original character......

3436559 Yeah I kinda explained that in my other story, his name is Neon Glow but his friends call him Neo.

A few errors, please don't forget to not put little comments towards the readers for it's tough to keep with the story, this really does pull you in though, so many questions, so little time, I'm excited for this story and I'll read on:pinkiesmile:

Who the hell is Neon Glow? :unsuresweetie: Buck it, I'm surprised Celestia is not trying harder to find her son, also, I can't favorite this, computer won't let me which is odd:facehoof: I would suggest an editor and to not use words that break up the flow of the story, other then that, not to bad.

Just a quick question:will the dinosaurs in this story be all evil?Or will there be at least one that will be the good guy?

3640082 Quick answer: not all of them.

You have no idea how strenuous it is from spilling the beans right now!
You almost broke me, but I'll update soon enough.
Stay tuned next one is going to really be interesting.:pinkiehappy:

If you would like to know more of the dinosaurs though, I am willing to give a few spoilers through PM.

3640159 Just tell me,aproximatly,what kinds of dinos will be here.And do you mind if you tell me if the bad guy from the beginning was a raptor with Sombra's horn?

3640167 I have already Sent the list through PM, hope it sparks interest. Hope you stick around until the end and what are your thoughts on the new cover?

3661489 I am.I am satisfied with both the list and the new cover.So from the looks of it I guess this means Spike's gonna be the hero,the protagonist,the guy in this story.That's just gonna make it even more exciting:dragon vs dinosaur.Totally awesome.Anyway,looking forward for this story so update soon.See ya!

This...is pretty good. Wonder why I didn't give it a read earlier. Please continue :twilightsmile:

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