Derpy has been acting strange. Well, stranger than usual. Her friends noticed. What's up with Derpy?
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Extra carrot there *Snicker*. Other than that, fun story.
Not bad.
I found the story rushed but enjoyable.
Grammar/sentence understandability was on the positive side of acceptable.
Although, one thing that is wrong is the fact that every sentence is on its own line and there are no paragraph breaks. You might want to fix that.
5.5 out of 10. Worth reading once but no more.
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Knew what was up when I saw the character list.
3283679 Yeah, it was pretty obvious
3283679 Yeah....I'm probably going to change that
it is really to short, i can´t see why all of the people like time turner so much, i have to be honest i am maybe one of the people which doesn´t like the usual pairings. I like Time Turner more as the one who makes Clocks or something like that, but i don´t like him as the time traveller. I don´t know why it just is how it is. Befor one special story i thought i would not like him at all, but there i found out that i probably just don´t like the idea of him being a time traveller, but i don´t know really why.
The story itself is like i said a bit short and....since it happend not that much i just can judge it at this one pairing. Since it happend that i am not the greatest fan of him i have to say i don´t like the story. Sorry but there is hardly something where i can think of what would make it a better story since it is that short.