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Borsuq


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"Kkak"
You'd better correct that in the description, and fast. Before the haters begin their rampage.

3281558 :applejackconfused:Wow.
You know, once in a while it would be nice to get the description right the first time, instead of correcting it later. I'm so useless...:ajsleepy:

3281571 no you aint. I have to vomb throughmy stories alot. Go ahead and read the first chapter of each. Bet youll find plenty of typos

3281571
Don't think that just because you make a typo in the first version of any text you write. It's very easy to mess it up; we all do that.

Ooo a bat pony FoE story. I like it:pinkiesmile:

War. War never changes. Duh if it changed it would not be war now would it. Defenetly gonna gander at this.

Let's see... mini-rant on how things aren't always what they seem at the beginning, followed by an extensive history lesson, culminating in the reveal that Twilight's the bad guy. However, those of us who aren't bat-ponies trapped in a Stable for 200 years, and can therefore watch MLP:FiM, know that such an act is extraordinarily out of character for Twi. Therefore, somepony else is our culprit. Who would have such a grudge against Twilight, Celestia, and, indeed, all of ponykind? Chrysalis has such a grudge, and would be capable of the ruse, but I'd think her revenge would at least try to include Cadance in a more significant way, not to mention that war tends to decrease the positive emotions her brood feeds upon. No, my money's on Sunset Shimmer, the slighted ex-student. She has the talent and hatred to pull it off, and wouldn't care about the consequences to the rest of the world.

Whether my theory's right or not, I really liked this chapter, and can't wait to see more.

The water talisman was the reason why ponies were able to leave inside the Stable.

leave-> live
and
Stable-Tec Arcane Targeting Spell AKA Stable-Assisted Targeting Spell -> S.A.T.S., according to the FoE Wiki

Other than that, it's an interesting start. I'll be watching this.

Good start.

I just finished re-reading Fallout: Equestria last nigt. :pinkiehappy:, and today I notice this little jewel, tx for mentioning it in Rebirth of the Damned.

Well Ponyville is a raider base not a slaver base. Also dude you used the wrong words a lot of times and misspelled also.

3319405 I already stated that this story is an alternate universe to the one in the original Fallout: Equestria. Here Ponyville is a slaver base

Faved, tracked, upvoted.:scootangel:
... you have my attention, my good man.:heart:
And for some weird reason, I want Nightkin and Miss Common to be together.
In a romantic way.
Yes, I know I'm weird.:applejackunsure:
*sigh*
Also, I just realized the title is yet another reference to the original Fallout. Damn, you'll make me reinstall it again at this rate!:twilightsheepish:
I'm kinda hoping this will stay as close to F1 as it is right now. There aren't many fics of that kind...:ajsleepy:

Holy BUCK... I think I know who miss common is supposed to be... Borsuq, you sick bastard. I see what you did there:raritywink:

Well, Equestria does have two different set of railways with one being horse-drawn (an actual terminology used in 'Over a Barrel'), and the other being steam engine. So, it's not far off to show the idea that the country can produce and use coals back then.

3579366 What I meant was that in the original Fallout: Equestria - as well as every side story that was born from it - Equestria doesn't have natural coal deposits, so they imported it from zebra's. The major reason for the start of the war in Fallout: Equestria's universe was a feud regarding the trading agreements.

His first day on his first job and he gets knocked out this bodes well for him.

Well it looks like he is screwed, good chapter :twilightsmile:

Calling that Common is Rarity or some shit

Saw this story on the FO:E Resource site, and it immediately sparked my interest. We don't often see people actively go against what the original story established, which is a brave move. I see a lot of potential for this story, and I'm already enjoying it. Your protagonist is likable, and you're using his abilities pretty well so far. I know this is a story I'll be watching for sure. Keep up the good work!

This story made me want to download Fallout 3. And so I did

A solid chapter, and the discovery of another Stable. I have the feeling that we'll be seeing a lot of Stable experiments in this story. For Nightkin's sake, at least he is starting to learn. Good job with this chapter!

Great chapter, as always, dear Borsuq. I'm loving this story.

Haha woo! Dude I love your stories, BUT I WANT MORE WOW!!

Wow. There should be a CLOP WARNING or something at the top of the chapter. Other than a few typos, great chapter! Keep up the good job!

4507213 Well, I did add the "sex tag" to the story :rainbowwild: Besides, is it really a clop when she used talon?:rainbowlaugh:

Well............ That wasn't necessarily unwanted. Just fucking sudden xD

This chapter made me laugh so much
Good story so far, I hope the next chapter is out soon

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Do you have the chance to do other chapters faster? But some chapters on point of view LittlePip and his friends? :rainbowkiss:

Just wanted to say this story Is one of my favorites:twilightsmile: Keep up the good work

I have seen quite many Fallout stories, some are dull and boring, but yours is different, to me, the characters feels really alive. This story really deserve more attention, too bad there's too much FoE stories around.

When will the next chapter be started/finished I really enjoy this story!

5299900 :twilightsheepish: Then you won't be happy to learn that I am planning to cancel this story, huh?

Sorry, I'm really sorry, but... it's simply too long! Look at it - it took me 60k words to get past night number 1, and it's over a year since I started writing it! Care to guess why this fic is called "150 Nights"?

I'm planning another FoE story, one that would be much, much shorter. As for this one, I'm going to soon post a blog where I will ask if somebody would like to finish this story, if there will be nobody, I will just write what was going to happen.

Once again, sorry:fluttercry:

too bad this story was cancel, I thought it was good

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