A wave of crime strikes the quiet town of Ponyville, seemingly random break ins and even armed robberies have ponies afraid to leave their own homes...until Twilight puts her hoof down and calls on the greatest detective in history. Though the book said the spell would call the "Greatest" detective in history....
An oversight leads to even more trouble for the mare and it seems that Mr. Drebin is her only hope of ending the strange uprising in crime...
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Holy crap! A Naked Gun cross?
3292450 Cant tell if good or bad, still funny
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Is good. VEEEERY GOOD!
This gonna be great.
I need to be brought to the library.
What is it?
It's a small building with lots of books but that's not important right now.
ok. so im about to read this, i almost never comment previous to reaing but i feel it necessary to state.
1. Leslie neilson was a god
2. the naked gun movies were epic
and 3.Leslie neilson was a god.
this means i may be a bit harsher in judgment than usual.
granted its not like my opinion matters but still.
3292982 everyones opinion matters and GOSH DARN IT I CAN TRY to impress so hope you like it
Oh this is going to be Good!!!!
this i will have to keep my eyes on.
one thing though.
it's crowd not crowed.
3293137 Swear I fixed that two seconds ago when a friend told me
I love the naked gun movies. Please do this story justice
Oh boy... I foresee many, many things in Twilight's future... most of them sound hilarious.
I bet Pinkie will love Frank's silliness
Oh the slap stick begins, also just to mention Franks last name is spelled "Drebin" with his full title being: Sergeant Frank Drebin, Detective Lieutenant Police Squad
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I'm not sure how much Pinkie would like Frank as he plays the "straight man" or comedic fool to the zaniness - would be interesting to see the two together thought!
3338769 I was wondering why you mentioned Franks full title because im actually going off the first movie, he was referred to as captain but I looked up how to spell his name and I did it right in the description...checked the first chapter AND I SPELLED IT WRONG
Pure Comical Genius work dude XP!!!
Oh Pinkie, Your so random.
I look forward to seeing there two working together that's for sure.
I'm loving this! It is perfectly in style for Police Squad and Naked Gun. Loved his staring at a picture of himself!
Because there are not words to describe how well Pinkie fits in that universe, I'm not even going to try.
I just read this. Very nice! The tone is perfect, and I can almost hear Drebin's voice when I read his lines here. The photo joke is clever, too; it's written to suit the medium (text story), and is not only funny itself, but makes the reader realize that they were just told about the joke, and they didn't notice, making it even funnier. That alone makes this story a cut above the average.
I'm hoping to see more of this story. Until then, I need to go watch two and a half movies again...
3890906 Thanks so much, I know this story updates slowly, but I never thought I'd have this kind of a reaction. I'm definitely putting as much time into the jokes since I cant use simple visual humor that naked gun is famous for. Again, thanks for the comment and I hope you enjoy the (hopefully near) future chapters
3901515 Thank you for the story. Glad to hear that there will be more.
Steve McCroskey re-incarnated?
My goodness this is going to be so hilarious just like the movies... Ah the good times
4265034 I certainly hope I do impress by the end of this crazy story!
This is awesome bud. Your Frank is sick (in a good way).
We can totally hear Drebin's voice in the lines you wrote. Excellent fic. Keep at it.
This still being done or is it dead?
6206082 It is indeed being made, but I tend to put my more serious toned fics at a higher priority. Mostly the time issue is because of my job and collage consuming my life, but now that I'm taking a break, I HOPE to put out more frequent content.
How I feel clicking on the first chapter of the story and How I felt the first time I watched MLP
7:23 https://youtu.be/zeN7D1x-phc