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Short and sweet! Please tell me there'll be more to come!:yay:

Comment posted by Fugly Duckling deleted Sep 29th, 2013

Glorious. Just... glorious.

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That...is so...AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

Aru
Aru #6 · Sep 27th, 2013 · · · Act 1 ·

Bon apetit, Angel.

Gyvon #7 · Sep 27th, 2013 · · · Act 1 ·

Don't you mean more to cum?

I'll show myself out

iakovl #8 · Sep 27th, 2013 · · 1 · Act 1 ·

:fluttershyouch::heart::fluttershyouch:
that was...
i need more

Like the rest of the stallions in that bathhouse, I am left WANTING :rainbowwild:

Where. Is. My. Antecedent!?!?

Manes #12 · Sep 27th, 2013 · · 3 · Act 1 ·

please tell me there's moar!:flutterrage:

:fluttershysad: Futashy felt left outside. :rainbowlaugh:

That shit was hot!:flutterrage:
And that ending:

Fluttershy: "Does it taste good Angel? Because it was in my pussy!"

Angel: "......." Slowly chewing the carrot in his mouth.

Fluttershy: "How do you like them' carrots!":rainbowlaugh:

.............moar

This idea works too well for its own good. :eeyup:

Well, it's definitely something new that's for sure. Can't tell yet if this is going to be good or not but it's certainly off to a good start.

Ok. Got my interest.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Very nice start. Now hurry up and write more!!!

No futa please. Also, I dare you to put Iron Will in there too! Mwahahahaaa! :rainbowdetermined2:

3266735 Everything is to attractive for the likes of you. Now I desire something to eat, go get me an artichoke and some cream.

Futa please! And no Iron Will! :V

Biting her bottom lip, she reached into her grocery bag, and came up with the giant carrot, a slow, naughty smile spreading across her muzzle. She held it out at hoof’s length for the bunny, “Here, Angel. I got this just for you.”

As much as I want to say "WTF SHY?!" Angel does deserve it for being a jerk!:rainbowlaugh:

Fluttershy gently lifted her hooves, placing them around the base of the base of the throbbing member with the lightest of grasps, giving him a gentle, soft squeeze.

I'm picturing that as one funny lookin' cock.

Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

angel gonna taste the horse.

that ending.... gold.

Ohhh my Gooood. :twilightoops:

Um... What did I just read?
Now to wait for at least one downvote, because it seems like every comment on here has at least one...

3268962 I know, right? Someone is hating on this story so fucking hard. Going around downvoting any comment that can be construed as supporting this story.

I can feel their hate, flowing from them like a cool breeze uplifting my spirits. It's fucking GLORIOUS! :pinkiecrazy:

Um..uh...
Yes.
:coolphoto:

I can hardly believe that the same pony who wrote An affliction of the heart also wrote this. Also I feel incredibly guilty about the fact that I actually enjoyed this story. I was disturbed by the idea but I decided not to judge this book by its cover(some covers don't deserve not to be judged(I will never convince myself to read Snowdrop and Nyx get Tortured) but this one I convinced myself to read) and I liked it even though it had my second favorite cannon pony doing very dirty things. I don't know what to feel anymore:pinkiecrazy:.

... it shot, like, five feet into the air... this the third time this has happened in the past two days. Are you going to do other stallions from the show? It would be funny if Iron Will, Shining, or hell, even Discord showed up. :rainbowlaugh:

.All she had to do was walking up to the door

Shuddering with anticipating

Hello, can we speak with you for a moment?
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ACT2... so soon... .YES... :pinkiesad2::pinkiecrazy:

Hm.

Seems awful familiar. In fact, this seems like a less entertaining version of the first chapter.

You should have made her do something different.

3269315 I SECOND THAT MOTION! Hell, why not throw Cranky, Spike, Mr. Cake or just one of the goat employees of Iron Will into the mix also!!!???

3269315 No Discord, please.

Aww, Big Mac was so nice to her, much kinder than that first jerk. I also wonder why he called her lass, after all from his perspective, he might not have been speaking to a lass. :rainbowlaugh:

and one day she got knocked up

Second chapter already?!
That's pretty quick! (Heyoo!!:trollestia:)

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I third the motion! Lets get some Shining or Spike in here!
Though no Discord.

Well, this has been pretty entertaining so far, though I wonder WHEN Fluttershy plans on taking her first stallion somewhere other than her mouth... just cause, even if I can see her slowly building up to it, seems like she's gonna continue getting horny without getting really satisfied in return (since I don't think Glory holes work so a man could pleasure a female orally, at least). And I don't know, I can't really see Big Mac with a Scottish-like accent, if this is the first time you've ever written him in a story (to my knowledge). I think I've seen it done before, but it's been a while if so... anyway. Is this taking place during Applebuck Season? Due to this line:

He was resting in the bath, a bandage wrapped around his middle, forehooves folded in front of himself and and chin resting upon them.

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Ironically enough, just saw that episode for the first time in a while, earlier today... since dunno if this is taking place during the series in off-screen moments or what, so far. And I wonder just how long before a familiar face enters a chapter as well on Fluttershy's intended side, if you have plans for her to be caught at some point, when someone else is already there or enters it during her time. Anyway, enjoying this so far, keep 'em coming! :twilightblush:

3269793 it gives him a reason to be at the spa :twilightsmile: Time is relative, as always.

Also, what WOULD he call a female? Lass? Girlie? Sheila? I don't know how cowfolk be talking...

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I don't know, I just don't see Big Mac speaking that way really, outside of canon. It's not that I have it as my own headcanon and it's fine, though I kinda wonder why you called me on it, when someone else said something about it earlier... :applejackconfused: but eh. And cowfolk? You mean horsefolk? :twilightoops: But fuhget about it and keep writing more! You're on a roll and I'd love to see more awesome writings from you, dude! :scootangel:

What I wouldn't give for a futa. I don't think I'd be able to handle it, possibly causing my groin to explode in a shower of blood at the epic-ness of being able to read such a scene... Please do it.

3270167 Pay me money. Lots and lots and lots of money. I really don't like futa and will never do it willingly. :twilightsmile:

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