• Member Since 6th Feb, 2013
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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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Imagine being the daughter of a famous superhero, having to be expected to follow in your parent's footsteps. That's how Aurora, daughter of Twilight Sparkle feels. She just wants to be her own person, do her own thing. But all that changes when she finds out that the other members of The Elements of Harmony had children- and that they're all going to her school! Not feeling so alone anymore, all seems to be going well until their mothers disappear. Now, having to be forcefully put into their mothers former places, can the next generation of heroes save the day before its too late?!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 16 )

For some reason, this seems a little rushed... And you don't just ask someone if their mom or dad was a hero or anything... Good story nonetheless!

3263866 the second chapter will be slower I promise. And come on! This is Pinkie's daughter we're talking about!

nice idea, look forward to seeing where you take it

3263913 no complaints in that department

So... A few questions for this tale....

1. Where's Spike in all of this ?

2. Derpy teaching a class ?!?

3. Didn't Spike "defeated" King Sombra ?


Still, nice start to an interesting story.

3265232 he comes in later. And Yes, chapter 2 will be hilarious. Also Oops

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When Spike does come into the story, will even Rarity's child recall him along with Twilight's child ?

So, I'll be the one to address the elephant in the room: Who are the baby daddies? :rainbowderp:

I really like this story, Please update it!!!!!!!

Pretty good start to a story, and I loved OHHC!:pinkiehappy:

Are you every going to update this again?

If you aren't going to finish this, do you think I could?

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