They say that after spending enough time with someone, you'll never forget them. No matter what, they'll always be with you. However, this brings up the question one must ask. How long is enough to even remember their face?
Submitted for the 31shotober challenge! (The first one actually submitted in October...)
Beautiful!
Well done.
3286724 thank you!
A few grammatical errors here and there, but a fine piece of literature indeed!
No need for capitalization of that a
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Unnecessary comma
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Am I reading this wrong or is there something off about this?
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Capitalization when starting dialogue!
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note Whoops
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Shouldn't that be, he started
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That just had an unnecessary question mark.
I'm sorry if I've bothered you with my pickiness but other than those few errors this was quite a lovely read
3286788 the reason for most of these is because I don't have a computer. I've been writing all my stories on my phone... Another reason why autocorrect is an asshole.
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Throw a spiked, flaming boot at autocorrect.
Manly tears where shed
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You Inspired me to write my own story, though its not as good as this one.
3287168 glad to hear I reached out to someone.
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It would've been nice if he remembered who his wife was, for a moment, at least...