Black Ops soldier named Captain Mike McKay or The Blaze is on one of the most important mission of his life. When he finally defeats his sworn foe a black hole erupts sending him to Equestria. With no idea where his is and no knowledge of anything i
Nggh, not really what I hoped for... here are some things I would have done diffrently.
One, no soldier... and not even the Paradox would blindly charge at an opponent. I would have raised my AR and fired without question.
Two, If I had a Blaster Rifle and a Manticore jumped at me I would roll to the side and engage it with the weapon.
Three, shoot Nightmare Moon in the legs
Four, if you are sneaking into a unknown territory... stay in the shadows. Here a short story of what I would have done. (Note that your character is in the story as well, I am just an observer.)
Putting my hood on and scarf over my face I began to run towards an alley way, my armor fading into the darkness as the light particles began to bend around me. It doesn't turn you completely invisible, just a faint shimmer if you looked hard enough. As soon as I was in I looked into the streets to see that the ponies started to move towards the 'town hall.' Making sure I wasn't being watched I ran into another alley then repeated this multiple times before I got close to the main building. I made my way over to a pillar before I pulled out my grappling gun, pointing it upwards the hoof fired then latched onto the roof, the grappling tugged on my arm as I was lifted into the air. Reaching the top I climbed up and made my way over to a window. Staying in the shadows I activated my Hawk Eye Mark 3 that were implanted inside my eyes. One of them started to glow meaning an IF tag, zooming in the HUD identified him as 'Captain Mike McKay'.
'I thought he died in that nuclear explosion 40 years ago.' I thought to myself.
Shaking my head I noticed something else, their was another one of those anthropoids but this one was different. This one had white fur with a multi-color mane, it also was tied up by energy bonds and a gag. The HUD identified the soldiers around her as Paradox.
'And I thought they all died.' I thought. [Enter Nightmare Moon scene here.]
Jumping down to the ground I made a run for an alley as the anthropoids came running out of the building.
Your welcome with the editing but now I see that even I missed a few lines....
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Nggh, not really what I hoped for... here are some things I would have done diffrently.
One, no soldier... and not even the Paradox would blindly charge at an opponent. I would have raised my AR and fired without question.
Two, If I had a Blaster Rifle and a Manticore jumped at me I would roll to the side and engage it with the weapon.
Three, shoot Nightmare Moon in the legs
Four, if you are sneaking into a unknown territory... stay in the shadows. Here a short story of what I would have done. (Note that your character is in the story as well, I am just an observer.)
Putting my hood on and scarf over my face I began to run towards an alley way, my armor fading into the darkness as the light particles began to bend around me. It doesn't turn you completely invisible, just a faint shimmer if you looked hard enough. As soon as I was in I looked into the streets to see that the ponies started to move towards the 'town hall.' Making sure I wasn't being watched I ran into another alley then repeated this multiple times before I got close to the main building. I made my way over to a pillar before I pulled out my grappling gun, pointing it upwards the hoof fired then latched onto the roof, the grappling tugged on my arm as I was lifted into the air. Reaching the top I climbed up and made my way over to a window. Staying in the shadows I activated my Hawk Eye Mark 3 that were implanted inside my eyes. One of them started to glow meaning an IF tag, zooming in the HUD identified him as 'Captain Mike McKay'.
'I thought he died in that nuclear explosion 40 years ago.' I thought to myself.
Shaking my head I noticed something else, their was another one of those anthropoids but this one was different. This one had white fur with a multi-color mane, it also was tied up by energy bonds and a gag. The HUD identified the soldiers around her as Paradox.
'And I thought they all died.' I thought. [Enter Nightmare Moon scene here.]
Jumping down to the ground I made a run for an alley as the anthropoids came running out of the building.