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It's practice as usual for the Wonderbolts, until their newest rookie crashes. Inspiration strikes Spitfire to get him a book from the Ponyville library to help him. But there she meets the librarian Twilight Sparkle, and a friendship soon develops. But what could be developing underneath the surface?
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There is a pro and a con.
It's TwilightxSpitfire
it's by Dracoliat
Gonna read it later...
Tracking for a read later.
A good, non-disturbing story from Dracoliat? I can't bucking believe it.
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Man it was okay but Spitfire crying? That's just off. I don't see her as much of a crybaby
288235 What?
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Because in the show she had 2 lines. In which she had to be the strong one.
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Lol, I know, it's weird isn't it?
288235 The only part where anybody cries is at the end, and even then it's not Spitfire, It's Twilight. (Unless I missed a section, I've been known to skip entire chunks by accident.)
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You forget at the beginning, the rookie cries, but ya Spitfire never that I remember.
I'm working on fanfic. but it needs improvement. so if you could give advice on it any would help. it's called the great pony war: the fight for freedom.
Great story. Also one thing amazes me. Most ponies can't spell per se correctly, always spelling it per say, not per se as it should be, it coming from Latin. You spelt it per se, ergo correctly, however you made mistakes like spelling unphazed, not unfazed; what kind of abomination is this? That you know the complex language but can't grasp the simple language?
and yes, sorry I do notice every small detail, sometimes too well. I apologize for that 
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Thanks for your input. And you're quite right, I did do that wrong, I am sorry for that. On a related note, people need to learn that not everything is spelled how it sounds!
288972 The basic spelling errors are unacceptable per se; normally I'd harp on about the spelling mistakes but I was impressed with everything else so I decided to overlook them. Hey, you know how to spell 'per se' and you know the right context to use 'per se' in, that surely gained my respect: just like the semicolons, per se is a thing that is to be used wisely but is really good when used correctly; your ability to use a tricky word like that correctly meant that you are more than excused for basic mistakes
I was genuinely impressed about your knowledge of complex prose and how to write.
With such sexy language being used by you, why should I whip you for basic errors?
unless the language is a voyeuristic sadist or enjoys BDSM of course. (yes, I apologize but I can't resist basic sexual jokes)
guys, it was the "i think I'm falling in love with Twilight" moment on a cloud. she let ONE tear off.
i got a little confuzzled in one bit there for a while...it was a bit...Obtuse, like that part got edited a bit. i got the rest of it quickly enough
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Thank you for your kind complements! I know I should have spent more time editing. However, in my defense, I wrote and edited this entire thing in 3 days.
Fuck Her Gently - Tenacious D
Mistakes everywhere.
Great story though. The ending was a lil sudden.
But it still PWEASED MEH!
So yeah I thought it was a good story lol.
"The pain interrupted her sentence as it's cold hand hand clenched around her throat again before letting go."
humans, i knew this story was to good to be true.
This was rather good, but felt really rushed, thous could have been a fantastic multiple chapter story if you would slowed down a bit..
The ending I loved. it was relay sweet and happy.
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Ya, I had to get it done in a few days... so I wrote it in 2, edited in 1
at least it's not a troll fic.
Quite a few formatting and punctuation errors, as well as homonym confusion such as what Leader_Cherif mentioned, such as 'there, their, they're' confusion at one or two points.
Tellyness and awkward execution in a few places, but otherwise it was alright.
I have a good idea...WRITE MORE OF THIS I WILL WORSHIP YOU AS MY KING FOR ALL ETERNITY!
You know this is good when i read this during school and start D'AAWWWing.
Disapointment. I was looking forward to another disturbing gory rape fic.
Why the hell did nobody tell me that I'm not the only one anymore who wrote a TwiFire story?
This was a quite adorable fic. A few strange wordings here and telly there, but nothing nobody else hasn't mentioned. I would have loved it if this story had been longer and more fleshed out, but it's enjoyable as it is.
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Thank you, I actually really liked writing this story, but I'll tell the truth it was a whimsy. Somepony told me to write it in IRC, so I did.
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Yeah, I read the notes at the end. I'll have to beat up Vurtax now for not telling me about it.
Good story. Just a few things though.
The microscopic blood vessels in Spitfire's cheeks burst, creating a strong blush.
Blushing does not work that way. Check here to see.
Books are not embroidered, cloth is. I think you meant to say embossed perhaps. Other than that and quite a few spelling and grammar errors, a decent story of a ship not often seen.
A shipping fic with the only intentional kiss was on the cheek. i am :)
Anyhow nice read
write an epilogue!!! i wanna see rainbow dash's reaction!!!! it would be funny as all hell!
i wish there could be more stories like this for spitfire and twi but i cant seem to find them
The amounts of d'awwwwww in this are critical. I loved the simple yet effective story, your charming writing style and your ability to create lots of cuteness. Well done!
I Need Epilogy Whit Reacion Of RD
its a really good story, i loved it but i wish there was more... you ended it really fast there at the end, but its still good
now for an idea for you to do.... how about Twilight/Octavia ship - thats a rare one
damn i just read that you quit this profile... damn...
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rd's reaction
Meets so well
I love books after a girl taught me to read and write.
She even taught me to type, she was like an older sister to be even though she's not.
I hope this goes though everybody.
Thank u for listening.
Spitfire sad 12
Thats sweet TwiFire 4Ever
That was adorable and I never tought of shipping them untill now