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So, this story is Chrysalis exploring Ponyville when the Mane 6 are away, catching various ponies in sexual acts, observing, and filling reports based on very bad misinterpretation?

Hilarious, though I'm hoping for a bit more on the sex, and maybe Chrysalis getting rutted at some point.

Ooh, you have me intrigued! :pinkiehappy:

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Chrysalis will get her turn. But the setting isn't gonna be restricted to Ponyville. I have plans for Canterlot's seedy underside, oh do I have plans.

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Ooh...sounds like fun.
Will we also be getting some of the other cities?

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No, just Ponyville and Canterlot. This isn't gonna be as long as Velvet. I only have 4 or 5 chapters planned out.

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Aww...
Any chance we'll be seeing some sort of continuation of "Naughty Night Nurses"?
(Okay, I'll be honest. I just want to see more of your style of Naughty Anthro Luna.)

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Not in this story. But if I ever get around to writing an actual sequel to Twilight Velvet's Creative Spark, we'll definitely see more of Luna.

Great to see another multi-chapter story from you! I'm definitely looking forward to future chapters! :pinkiehappy:

The potential in this fic....is staggering...:pinkiehappy: *round of applause*

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I can't really take credit for the premise, since Overlord-Flinx came up with the general idea.

3280415 None the less, well done! *huge thumbs up* Its one thing coming up with an idea, and another thing to actually make, create, and portray that idea. :twilightsmile: You are just as awesome~ :heart:

I vote for Chrysalis and Shining Armor, just for the heck of it, but if it's Chrysalis and Celestia... I might just keep watching for it. :pinkiecrazy:

But in Sweet Apple Acres, I have a Feeling it will be Cherilee and Mac... If not, the worse that can be seen is a CMC threesome.

Say, I have a question for you Miss Naughty_Ranko! I saw the anthro tag (I'm a fan of such stories) and I saw the cover for your story. Tell me: is it a 100% acurate as to what Chrysalis looks like in your fic? I hope I'm not gonna gross you out or anything but I was hoping for a well endowed queen Chrysalis with large boobies! :twilightblush:

Man! :rainbowlaugh: Chrysalis sucks at deception! She is completely incapable of hiding her emotions or acting as somepony else! XD Bad actress, bad actress! (just like in a Canterlot Wedding)

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Yep, that's what she looks like in this story. The fact that she's rather flat is actually somewhat of a plot point.

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Just trying to stay true to her character. Chrysalis is a bitch. There's no other way of saying it. But the thing is, she likes being a bitch and she has fun being a bitch. So disguised or not, that character trait is gonna assert itself.

She's the Queen of the Changelings, why let stealth get in the way of her fun? And I gotta tell you, because of that fact, she's a lot of fun to write. :rainbowlaugh: She's that delicious kind of evil where you sometimes think "Yeah, I wanna be able to piss on people like that and get away with it."

"Filly buster" sounds like an Equestrian porn name, doesn't it?

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Well, it's supposed to be the ponyfied version of the political move called 'filibuster', but I guess some other things might come to mind at first glance.

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I figured^^

It's just - I can so imagine some cheesy political porn movie have some he-stallion come in though the door and announce him as "representastud Filly Buster!"

I don't usually like Applecest.
However, I love the idea of Apple Bloom using pictures of it to fund the CMC. Also, that shout at the end was hilarious!

“CUTIE MARK CRUSADER CLOP DIRECTORS! YAY!”

Subtlety thy name is Applebloom. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

In the future smearing a potential love interest with different kinds of food, mainly fruit and sweets, should be considered the first step towards initiating intimate contact. A cake to the face may prove most effective towards that purpose.

As can be observed in the wild:
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Man now I can't stop thinking about ranma 1/2's Nabiki and this applebloom in the same room.
Holy shit I just noticed your name .

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It's a rare thing when someone notices, where my user name actually comes from.:pinkiehappy:

I suppose AB is a little like Nabiki here, though I didn't intend that specifically. Yeah, she's making money from selling their pictures, but at least she's not blackmailing them with it ... yet.:twilightblush:

Holy...I wonder if the queen is ever gonna get any...even she needs some lovein now and then

600 senators? Thats some Star Wars Senate stuff right there!

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Actually it's the size of the Senate in ancient Rome, which is where Star Wars no doubt got it from. (Star Wars does this a lot, referencing ancient cultures to build their backstory out of. Jedi are very much samurai, if you get right down to it.)

I don't wanna sound like a history snob, but that's very important to me. I use the actual, historical source to plagiarize take inspiration from.

This was awesome!
I loved how she handled Blueblood, and I love the twist at "a Chrysalis cosplayer"! And the sex was hot, too!
And that bit at the end was priceless. Can't wait to see how this new invasion - probably ordered by someone other than Chrysalis - turns out.

well, damn son. that was kinky.

Didn't like the Blueblood part.^^

Addendum: Because of personal bias on my side. Just wanted to note that.

On to more, pressing matters so it seems. I wonder what Chrysalis will do next? Other than returning to the hive to deposit her prize.

Wow, Chrsyalis that is some pedobear level shit you're suggestin

That was a bit... :rainbowwild: sadistic of you to finish this fic like this. Any plans for a sequel?

Nice ending, now I have the image of Celestia being dommed by Chrysalis up the ass... I like this. :moustache:

Feel bad for her agents though, :rainbowlaugh: poor bastards.

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Not planning a sequel at the moment. Sorry.

I never intended to draw this out too long. I've planned this ending from the start and while I could have maybe added another chapter or two, it would have just needlessly convoluted the story. Sometimes it's best to quit while you're ahead.

A well executed :twistnerd:, to make an awful joke.

“Either by treaty or strength of arms, I'm gonna make Celestia my bitch. And she's gonna like it, when I slowly fuck her up the ass.”

write a fic about this. probably as a sequel to this. Heck, get all the royalty in on it.:pinkiehappy::trollestia::moustache::eeyup:

This was hilarious! I loved it!
Very well done, and a true demonstration of Chrysalis' political power.

Very clever Chrissy. Very clever indeed.:trixieshiftright:

oddly enough, I've found myself curious as to what chrysalis would do after such a defeat at the wedding in canterlot.:ajbemused:

That's a nice thought to end with... The Solar goddess getting ramrodded and impaled on Chrysalis's morphed genitals. Sounds like a job for a clop writer! Any takers?!

Haha! Cato and Scipio! I got the references! I feel special. :pinkiecrazy:

At the little senator meeting in the beginning, after the lead one turned around, I feel it would have been more in-character for Chrissy to blast a hole through him and be like, "Any more opposing opinions? No? Good. Begin preparations for the next invasion."

But maybe that's just me being the sadist I am. :pinkiecrazy:

BRILLIANT! Such beautiful work from a beautiful mind. I am proud to call you a friend, and to have had this idea put to words by you. You're a better writer then I am when it comes to the "naughty", as it were. Bravo. A spectacular job. :moustache:

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I was given a great prompt to work off. :raritywink:

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