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TheExhaustedBrony


There's a reason why I'm TheExhaustedBrony. I should really invest in some sleep.

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There are some creatures that are oddly built. Birds that have wings but cannot fly is a prime example. Scootaloo asks herself why she was born a Pegasus without its defining ability? After some careful thought, Scootaloo finally realized what she must do to live a fulfilled life.

Submitted for the 31shotober challenge.

Inspired by this video:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=sdUUx5FdySs&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DsdUUx5FdySs

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

No way! I remember that video! T'was so sad...

Anyways, looks like you got a good start on the 31shotober challenge. (Also bits of ramdom typos.) Good luck.

that was rather, anticlimactic, I think, not really sure :rainbowhuh:

she looks back at the town of ponyville,

looks should be "looked" and ponyville needs to be capitalized. Also I remember this video. Man, it was very sad and this is to.:fluttercry:

Rest in Peace Scootaloo.:scootangel:

3246732 my god damn phone... DAMN YOU AUTOCORRECT!!!!

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Personally, I believe that's one of the reasons the concept of suicide itself is so tragic...one day there's someone with a life that's so full of potential.

But, through their depression that lose sight of all the positives as they begin to drown in their sorrow and eventually succumb to it.

It feels anti-climatic to everyone involved, especially those that care about them as it was a life that ended before its time.

(I had a friends who committed suicide...I didn't really KNOW them too well, but it still hit me pretty hard.)

So I think that may have been the point.

As Dash and the other Cutie Mark Crusaders may have felt the same way after they realize what happened.

This is also common when people wake up from serious accidents with severe injuries and they feel like their lives are meaningless and that they are a burden to others.

So it's not unreasonable to believe that Scootaloo would have similar feelings, especially when her idol/adoptive sister enjoys flying so much and always talks about how awesome it is, coupled with Diamond Tiara bullying her for being a cripple.

Okay that was good. Well done.

3853665 so, anything about the story? Also, I appreciate the heads up, I had forgotten about that.

Are there going to be more chapters

Are there going to be more chapters

This is very well written. I hope that you will put more chapters on it eventually.:heart:

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