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Everyone bullied Daisy Shining Starr E'merald Sapphire becuz shes super pretty and smart and their jealous, but then Daisy gets turned into a unicorn and goes to Equestria and yeahhh!!!!!! this is her adventure!!!!

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Comment posted by Crimson Mist deleted Sep 24th, 2013

This reminds me of MyOcCassandraIsBestPony, or whatever the name was.

Omaigud! This is so Kawaii! Moe-moe sugoi sugoi desu ka!

i do'nt spek japnse so dnt askk m3 abut it. :3

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Comment posted by FicusCat deleted Oct 6th, 2013

3265357 It's becoming harder to tell on this site if someone's a troll or for real.

dis maid me crai :fluttercry:

Why do I find this amusing???:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowhuh:

Comment posted by Blackguard deleted Oct 6th, 2013
Comment posted by lo12to deleted Oct 6th, 2013

OHMIGAWD!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
U DIDNT TELLME U MAD ASTORY!!11!!11!!:twilightangry2:

THSIS SOO GOODU!! :scootangel:
I LOVEIT!:rainbowkiss:
OMIGOWD U SHOLD PUT MY OC :raritystarry:SKYMAGMA RUBY-LAVA:raritystarry: IN IT!!!!!!! SHE CAN B BESTESTESTESTS FRENDS WITH DISY!!!! IL SEND U A PM ABUT HERRRRR!!!
:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:
THIS SI SOOPER AMZING AND SHLD B FATURED RITE NOWWWW!!!:eeyup::coolphoto::derpytongue2:

Look at all those deleted comments
Well...you can't...but you know what I mean

...Did you perchance read My Immortal before writing this?

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Wait! I think it's trying to communicate! Someone get a translator!

But I don't see why this should be featured. This story sucks. I dare say it's the worst I've ever read.

Unlikable and obvious wish-fulfilling self-insert Mary Sue gets shipped to Equestria and becomes instant friends with Princess Celestia. Yeah, that's a strong, original plot.

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Amen, my friend. Author is either a troll or an idiotic five-year-old girl high on apple juice with the mental maturity and attention span of a gnat.

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This is the best comment I have read in a long time.

Comment posted by apple shock deleted at 8:21am on the 25th of September, 2013

You fucked up.

Comment posted by The Orthodox Priesthood deleted Oct 17th, 2013

3312090 Really, I'm surprised anybody could even consider the latter. I've never once met someone so dim that they'd actually write a story of this tier. That's beyond thought.

Besides, this is the best fanfiction I've read since Fallout Equestria (joking {and I'm not happy that I feel the need to elaborate it was a joke}).

... this chapter sucks more balls than Knighty. And that's saying something.

No wonder you "faled engilsh" :facehoof:

You're doing it wrong.

You're supposed to call us "preps", you're goffik and you have to continually misspell your OC's name. It's almost like you want us to believe that instead of a troll you're just some kid writing really really really really really really really really really shitty fanfiction. But you tipped your hand too soon and there's nothing you can do to change that.

I would suggest creating a new account and starting a completely new troll from there.

Don't be so hating guys, this is pretty good for a 6-year old.

But at least let me help you out.

“Honey it is time to go too school” yelled Mrs. Sapphire.
“No I don't want to” Daisy, her daughter yelled back.

Daisy Sapphire is a pretty girl age 16 with silky long auburn hair that cascaded down her shoulders to her back and bright emerald eyes that people always told her that they were glowing and super long eyelashes that looked like she was always wearing mascara when she really wasn't. Well her real name was really Daisy Shining Starr E’merald Sapphire, but people call her Daisy Sapphire for short.

This should be:

“Honey it is time to go to school” yelled Mrs. Sapphire yelled.
“No I don't want to” Daisy, her daughter Daisy yelled back to at her.
Daisy Sapphire was a pretty 16-year old girl age 16 who had with silky long auburn hair that cascaded down her shoulders. to her back and She had bright emerald eyes whom that people always told her that they were glowing. and super long eyelashes that looked like she was always wearing mascara when she really wasn't. Well, her real name was not just Daisy, butreally Daisy Shining Starr E’merald Sapphire. In order to make things easier people just het Daisy Sapphire. but people call her Daisy Sapphire for short.

See? It's not that hard.

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