Vagando Baronessa
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Very smexy and well done.
3243140 Grazie, dear
Don't often see human female x pony action, that should change.
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3243202 Thank you! I will be writing much of it, I think.
3243238 Moist is a funny word, isn't it?
This fic is very well writen, well done.
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It's a word they just can't stand to hear, for some reason.
I know some people who are seriously bothered by it.
3243246 like my mom
Human female x female pony?
Yup, I'm definitely going to be reading this!
Lesbians are awesome!
Wish there were more of this type.
Towards the beginning of this story there were too many hanging 'she's. We don't know the character's name in the first three paragraphs, hitch is fine. But we also don't know that she's human, or really anything about her. Seeing a sentence like
with no follow up explanation is a bit of a letdown. I guess I was expecting a bit more in what Sofia looks like or her mannerisms, maybe some info on how she got to Equestria, whether there's a lot if humans there or she's the only one, stuff like that. But the beginning just confused me instead, since it was vaguely unclear that a flashback was happening or that the she before the pagebreak and the she after the pagebreak were referring to he same being. So I just got confused.
After the pace picks up the story did get pretty enjoyable. But especially if you're planning on writing more stories with Sofia, you should consider describing her in more details.
3244631 I am very sorry! I do plan to write more about Sofia herself, but this story was knocking in my head. I write her timeline, and when I do, little places jump out at me, and this one did. You are right, I should have explained her better!
Thank you for your comment! I will do better next time.
3244655 it was just a suggestion, and I'm sorry if it came across harshly. I did enjoy this quite a bit, but I just wanted to point out a way it could be even better.
3245580 It is okay! I welcome crit on my stories. If I did not, I would not post them so publicly for all people to say things! I appreciate your comment, Midnight herald
3245588 good to know...
Sometimes my comments come across as insulting, so I just wanted to make sure I followed up or something.
Rawr.
Hawt. Followin'.
Seriously though, this story is a rare gem. For once, we have a human in Equestria, who's not american. And OMG, that human is a girl! And by the Emperor, it's a clopfic! One of those clopfics. Thank you. Do continue.
3245680 Sì, I noted a lack of story to that effect here and my friend encouraged me to join and write. I am glad you enjoy it!
a clopfic between a human and a pony where both the pony AND the human r female? my praryers are answered!!!
3243238 ...RAPE FACE!!! BAD CHEERILEE! BAD! WHERE'S A ROLLED UP NEWSPAPER WHEN YOU NEED ONE?!
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Cheerilee is a saucy mare.
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Ok...I can't read it. I got a bad bad bad bad feeling from it. First sentence and I DO NOT WANT!!!
Did not disappoint in the slightest. There needs to be more clop like this. Good job.
I'll be following you to see Sophia's further adventures. ;)
3247569 I am sorry! I can assure that all act is with consent and friendship
3247649 grazie! I will make more of Sofia with maybe past next to say how she found ponies.
3248016 I'm sorry...The bad feeling isn't going away... I wish you luck in your writing though...my instincts have never led me wrong....
3248795 I wish I could help! But not doing telling what makes you have sad feeling does not let me help!
Good luck for you finding story you can read
3250393 Sad? nooooo....Bad? Yes... LIke Insanity wolf bad feeling....
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Uh... What?
What?
No. Just no. "Insanity Wolf" doesn't explain it. Explain it in words we can understand.
As it stands, you're judging a story off the first fucking sentence and being disrespectful to the author. Either read the damn story and then leave feedback or shut the fuck up and go away.
Also, question... Are you that adverse to failure that if the first line in a story is "I have failed again" it ruins it for you? Uh seriously? Grow some fucking balls man.
Edit: After looking at your page, I found this in your only story's description:
Seriously? You demand that people read your story but then judge another person's story without reading it?
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3252644 It is okay! I cannot force the persons to be polite, I can only be nice girl myself and hope for response in kind
I do not understand why persons keeps coming back when refusing to read story, perhaps maybe lonely? I do not know! But I can't even thank for opinion on story when none is given by person 
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Girl, you too nice for this site.
This guy is being a massive faggot, judging your story, which is quite frankly good, without reading it, and then won't leave and continues to lower you down and make you feel like you're doing a bad job, for no real reason. I'm not gonna stand by and watch that happen.
Anyways, if you'd like, I can give you some feedback on this story and your new one. I very much like helping new authors.
3252685 I am not thinking faggot-word is correct? I do not know. Midnight is lucky girl though!
You are kind! I appreciate offer from you, if you like for sending critique in a note to me?
3252644 ...Instincts. When you've read lots and lots of stories, you are informed by the first choice of words. The story that you were looking at...well...it's been cancelled for some time. And just because I decide to run from a story where I get a bad feeling from, does not mean that you can insult me for my choices. As true as the fact that I am adverse to failure in general is, doesn't mean that I think the story is bad. I informed the author, that though initial interest drew me here, I lost that interest rather quickly, and was on my way. Have fun insulting the author by having a fangasm for fanfiction on the internet.
3252708 I am not understanding. If I click story because I think I may like, but then decide I do not after first line, I do not leave comment about not reading story. That is a strange thing! Not all story will be cup of tea for everyone, and that is okay. I am sorry you are having such issue with my Sofia. Perhaps simply not reading my stories you see?
Best of luck for you
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Dude, you were the one posting a comment that basically comes across as 'lol didn't read, because my gut says so'. You could've just gone on your way, because you didn't actually have anything of worth to say about the story. What were you hoping for, a gold star? Well done, you achieved something very special today.
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Uh, fangasm? I'm... not having a fangasm. I'm defending a new author from a massive fuckwit (If you don't know who I'm talking about, look in a mirror.)
I've read a lot of stories. Lots of stories. A lot of bad ones, too. But I don't just judge a story by the first choice of words. I'm a reviewer, an editor, a proofreader. I help authors improve their stories so people don't run from them. I'm not a dick about it.
Look, if you have a bad feeling about a story, that's fine, don't read it. However, do not leave a comment on that story to leave the author scratching their heads wondering what went wrong and how to improve. That's just completely disrespectful of the author, inconsiderate of the work they've put into the story, and will never help them improve.
Quite frankly, you were an ass, and you need to apologize to the kind author of this story, who's been a lot more lenient with you than I ever would be. Like seriously, I'm not comprehending how she can apologize to you, given how much of a fuckface you've been, but she did, so the least you can do to save face is simply say sorry.
As it stands... well...
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3252738 Thanks. I'm sorry I couldn't/wouldn't read your story. I guess I'm just not ready for it. Good luck with your writing. I'm also sorry for bringing this ... situation...to your comment section.
3252743 Well, aren't you fun. You're kind of right. At least you didn't outright flip your shit because I basically said I wouldn't read it. I fully intend to read this story eventually...just not right now.
3252747 You...are ruder than I'll ever be...Simply put, she can't improve because I didn't find anything wrong with it. It's simply not for my taste, and even if I could 'eat' it right now, I couldn't hold it down, and I'd rather not do such a disservice to what I'm sure is a wonderful story.
By the way...I think you've got something wrong. No story IS bad. Sure, there is always room for improvement, but an Idea stays that way till it's written down. Saying a story is bad, is like saying a branch of culture is bad, simply because you don't like where it's headed or where it stemmed from.
I also don't see why you have to continue to insult me. I've been nothing but pleasant to you, and explain my reasoning for my choices. You don't see me calling you names, do you?
On a final note, I have apologized. Multiple times. I apologized that I was having problems reading it, I did the same for not having a specific opinion on it, and again because I simply couldn't enjoy it like I want to, all of which you seem to have missed in your exercise to criticize another's methods in constructive criticism. Maybe you can take your advice on the same? Either way, I at least made the effort to be polite. On the internet. Where assholes find new meaning in their pitiful lives, and trolls try a new face every other day... You'd think I'd be used to that, and just not care about manners any more....Hmn...rumination for another time.
3252851 I appreciate apology! Perhaps if you find story you cannot read again, you do not comment? It is a confusing thing
I ask only respect, and it did not seem very respect to bad-mouth story without giving a chance.
Story can be bad. Story can be good. Story can be mediocre. All person have different standard for bad and good storys, so blankets statements that there exist 'no bad story' does not help author.
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... Except that's not what you said. You basically just went "nope nope nope".
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Anyways, if you can't "stomach" the story, then here's what you do... you leave it alone. You don't leave a comment, That's what was disrespectful. That's why I called you out. Because doing such a thing is disrespectful. It's inconsiderate to the author. What you should instead do is just leave it, or put it on your read-later or something, and then comment after you've read it, or at least most of it.
What you did, currently, is not constructive criticism. It provides no useful feedback. It's a useless, negative comment that doesn't need to be here. I give constructive criticism to authors when I post on their story. I don't give them shit. I don't go "I had a bad feeling so I won't read it have this negative comment that leaves you confused and concerned and then enjoy as I don't explain what I felt was wrong." which is what you did. I make my points crystal clear, so as to eliminate the need for people to be confused.
You have not apologized for your disrespectful comment. What I want you to do is apologize for making that comment in the first place.
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This. All of this.
3252873 I'll be sure to do that. I'm sorry If I wasn't clear in earlier comments. 3252909 Sarcasm won't work if your just as guilty of the thing you're being sarcastic about. People make comments all the time, whether they are about the story or not. It's part of the internet. I'm sorry I've offended your delicate sensibilities, but I'm not going to apologize for something I don't feel sorry about. I will apologize for the confusion...but not for making the comment in the first place. I can't take back my actions, so why should I act as if I could? It makes no sense to do that.
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Ooooh boy we got a special kind of cocksucker here.
Look, the reason you should apologize is to be respectful to the person you offended. She already made it clear you confused her and made her feel unsure about her work with your original comment, yet you still have yet to make it up to her.
Sure you can't take them back, but you can still be respectful and make up for it. I've fucked up before and apologized for it. It doesn't undo it, but it does make me look like a decent person who's willing to acknowledge that they fucked up.
3252972 I did acknowledge that. I'm just not going to say sorry for it. I've fucked up hundreds of times. It doesn't stop you from fucking up. There is simply no way to make it up, at least reasonably. I've done what I can do, and the extent of how far I will go. I've apologized for my mistakes, and apologized to the one who counts. In this situation, you don't. You've been rude to me, criticized even the lightest of what I've said, and are nagging me to apologize, for which I've already done. Heck, you've even insulted me. (Not that I mind, as I get to have a rather entertaining conversation with you.) Whether or not I do something, is not up to you to decide.
I think it's about time we, (yes we), leave the comment section with our unimportant conversation. There isn't anything we can do or say to improve the story, and we're taking up space. I for one, am leaving as soon as I finish this comment, and I suggest you do the same. It's all up to you whether you decide to do the same.
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I'm not asking you to apologize to me. I'm asking you to apologize to her. I couldn't give two shits about your apology to me.
Look, even if you can't "fix it" you can at least show you're a decent fucking person by apologizing. I can't believe you're being such a bitch about this. Just fucking do it out of kindness. You'll find that some people are a forgiving bunch, myself included.
3253030 Mi scusi, EricKilla is nice person I do not mind on comments. Problem was caused by you, I try to fix and being nice but how you apologize for me and then same comment say not sorry?! Dai?!
Uffa. Che palle!
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3253144>>3253070 ...HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA. I didn't cause a problem and the insults stop here. I've been nothing but polite, while one of you insults me, and the other becomes more and more confused. I cannot apologize for what I've done. I can apologize for the misunderstanding though, and I've done so. I personally think the story, (what I've read beyond the first sentence,(which you assume is all I've read, being untrue)), does well enough. I didn't insult the story. I didn't insult the author. I didn't even say the story was bad. All I've said is that I can't read it. That I won't read it. My bad for not elaborating. But I'm getting tired of the insults. Stop bothering me. It's tiring and distracting me from currently more valuable pursuits. It's not even entertaining anymore. You stroke your egos, trying to crush mine. I've defended myself and my actions, but I never stooped to calling names, and I simply no longer want to deal with this. If you can't be polite, stop posting a response. I know you don't like what I do/did, but that's not an excuse you can use anymore. I know you both have a vocabulary that you can use beyond, 'fuckwit' and the other variable blows to proper grammar and syntax. It's saddening to see people lose their skills and mastery over language for something as petty as not liking what another does. Please stop. It's just too sad to watch.
3253207 You are not polite. Passive aggression is not the nice thing. I see you do not respond that why you apologize in one breath and then say not sorry in the next? I am seeing all comments, reply to one person still visible to all. If you say you done, be done, and stay to your word. I try polite but you rather be angry and flailing.
I am hoping you make friends sometime. Best of luck in your storys and reading!
3253207
If you're gonna leave, then fucking leave. So far you ain't doing that.
3253225 Thanks. Have fun.
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Oh, before you go, I didn't notice this part: Vaganado Baronessa is Italian. English is not her first language. So don't you even start trying to insult her language skills, as she's done more work to learn languages and improve herself than you have.
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Don't worry about that guy. Some people just don't know when to keep their big mouths shut...
You really are too nice for this site! 
As for Eric calling him a "faggot," that's just a general Internet term for uno stronzo. Most of us aren't homophobes.
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3254779 Si
Argument is keep going, but happy not on my story!
Eric is a boyfriend to friend, I am understanding his weird.