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When Luna finds the TARDIS in her garden, the Doctor takes her on adventures in time. This is my first story so comment on how to make it better. If you guys like it, I'll write more. Enjoy!
- Kevin

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 25 )

I like it! :pinkiehappy:

Keep going at it so you can improve on your writing, if you really wanted my opinion that is.
I'll just patiently wait for it to update. :rainbowwild:

...Indeed. Perhaps a "Follow" is in order.

Still not as cool as the doc,Some bushman,amy and queen Cleopatra fighting dinosaurs in space

I fricking love it. Or in the words of Rainbow Dash, THAT WAS AWESOME!

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It wasn't Cleopatra, it was Nefertiti

Thank you guys! I'll definitely write more:derpytongue2:!

First time someones had 1 of the princesses travel with him, so thats a bonus for you:pinkiesmile:

You know,its a good thing you said camouflage unit and not chameleon unit or something of the likes,Because im pretty sure the chameleon unit is the reason its a police box to begin with

I remember reading the mane six and Dr. Whooves and the tardis from fanfiction.net. it was a good story.

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I never read that, I think I will.

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Would you be so kind as to give Us a link?

I am pretty sure the "T" in The Doctor is suppose to be capitalized. Anyway, you surprised me twice in this chapter alone. Want to see more. :derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:

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Alright! I'm working on it. Working on another story at the same time is kinda hard, but I can do it!:pinkiehappy:

Princess Luna speaks old English like "thou" and "thy" :moustache:

Random Pinkie:pinkiehappy:

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Shhhhhhh, nobody knows that.

I thought it was space-time continuum

Not time-space.

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Whatever! Write your own Luna doctor who crossover if you're so smart!

A little too fast paced. Otherwise, yay! A Doctor Who/ MLP crossover! I'm no whovian, but I still love these kinds of stories! YAY!!:yay::yay::yay::yay:
Random moustache! :moustache:

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See? You're the kind of critic everyone wants to critique their stories. First you start with the problems:

A little too fast paced.

Then you proceed to praise the story:

Otherwise, yay! A Doctor Who/ MLP crossover! I'm no whovian, but I still love these kinds of stories! YAY!!
Random moustache! :moustache:

Thank you for your time.:twilightsmile:

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I swear I see you everywhere .-.

Whens next chapter due?

Is this thing abandoned?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW really I WAS ENJOYING SO MUCH OF IT:ajsleepy:

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