Princess Luna is tired of seeing Wonderbolts only race against Wonderbolts, and feels they've become a bit complacent strutting around like they own all of Canterlot. When she finds a few pegasus ponies passionate about racing, she pulls together these rag-tag group of racers in attempt to bring the Wonderbolts down a few pegs. But between the arrogant Night Arrow, the young and naive Cloud Crash, and the way-too-hyper Skylight, will this new team tear itself apart before they can prove themselves on the track?
Chapters (6)
Great! This kept me entertained the whole night and i must say this is interesting. Good job with the story! :)
5 chapters in 3000 words...
you have chapters in an average of 600 words... a chapter... A CHAPTER.
methinks you have pacing issues.
Reached this chapter within two hours of silmutaneous reading!
i like it and i'm faving
Far too few stories about the Shadowbolts. I hope this doesn’t have any pacing issues.
~SolidFire
3232575 Thanks for the feedback! I've been kinda sitting on this story for quite a while. So do you think I should just erase the "chapter 1" and "chapter 2" within the big sections and just keep it divided the way it is on the site? So I'd technically only have 6 chapters? Or divide it a little more than that? I had no idea the length of a chapter would be so troubling for readers, I thought it would just be the content of the story. I'd love to fix my pacing issue, and make my story more enjoyable. Thanks again!
3232506 thank you! I appreciate it! I have a lot of stories written about Skylight, Arrow and the Shadowbolts, and I hope to get them up on the site soon!
3233003 thank you!
3233212
the content of a story IS THE chapters. What nonsense are you spouting with that.
There's a difference between a scene and a chapter learn their roles and apply them.
scenes being a collective of a chapter.
when comes next chapter
Hi. I in literally in love with this story! It's so good!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!