Spike is now the richest dragon in Equestria. You wonder how, you say? Well, here's a secret: Spike was an ordinary person, just like you. That is, until he was forced into becoming a Player. Now forced to buy and sell, his tower must increase to the max to reach the one called Monopoly Man.
Wearing his Golden Hat, having a female pony as a familiar, and a arch enemy, he is forced to reach the top without any pony knowing, not even Twilight and his friends. But will he be able to make it far without them knowing?
You do know that there's an actual Monopony board game right? :D
Loving the story so far, keep up the great work!
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I don't know the rules to this. I don't know who the characters are. I don't know aaaanythiiiiing!
Still, this looks interesting. I'd suggest hiring an editor or a proofreader, as there are quite a few spelling errors here.
I'm interested where this is going. I think this was based off of an anime right?
I'm liking this so far. had to reread a Couple times to understand but I still like it nevertheless. Can't wait till the next chapter mate
4271050 Correct. Forgot what it was called, but LOVED IT!!
4271168 So did I, to be honest. Confusing, but it'll make sense later.
GAH! I'm so confused...please.....explain?
4273829 Spike's confused as well, just gonna have to leave ya hanging until further notice.
EDIT: But long story short , Spike's forced to join a game of Monopoly, featuring Players and other things as he tries to become the richest dragon alive...and live for that matter. But as other Players try to stop him, do you think he'll survive?
[C] - The Money of Soul and Possibility Control
I'm really liking it, but I have a hard time getting over the CMC, obvious hat, and fluttershy sub-plots... I'm not saying I hate it, I'm just saying that it can make the fic REALLY bad, REALLY fast with those parts in it
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Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)(can you make this into a Harem fanfic?)
4548143 Thank you! And I will, just not yet.
Wow ..... is all I can say
4582620 You make it sound like you didn't think this story wasn't gonna be that good. What's with the wow?
I wasn't expecting what I had read
4588920 You were expecting the story to not be good?
So did I.
good story and I have to say from just reading these 3 chapters so far the story reminds of the c-control anime
4271050 if it was it was the anime c-control probaly
5405291 Thank you!
this is sooo good more plz
more plz