• Member Since 14th Feb, 2012
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Chivalry


Big Mac is Watching

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One night, Leon Christo, a pegasus pony, was walking home from art school. As he made his way home, he was ambushed, and nearly killed by a group of bullies. Since that traumatizing experience, he has never been quite the same; suffering horrific nightmares that blend to reality....

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 19 )

That's right, I'm on this site too! Though only recently, now I can track this here too!

Thank you for following this so diligently. I had no idea you were on this site too! :pinkiegasp: Expect me to follow your story as well!

I love this story, oh god why didn't I discover this earlier. Tracked

I bet you weren't expecting me to comment on this site now were you!
Anyway I have to say that yet again you have my mind buzzing in anticipation!
I can't wait till the next chapter and I will also be reviewing on the other FF.net too :)

*slow clap* This has been an amazing back story, I would just like to say that to you, you turned a back story into a great story, and for that, I commend you, it has been nice to read through these and it makes me look even more forward to BlackSpire's story being continued.

Anyway, I will be watching you, whether or not you ever write another story, I will be watching O_O (Sorry for the creepy face afterwards, I just thought that it was funny that you get an alert that says that I am watching you)

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:rainbowderp: You're right, that is a creepy face. :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you so much for the words of praise, I just wish more people shared their opinion... :pinkiesad2:

BlackSpire and I have been working very hard to make sure that both stories fill their expectations and compliment each other. His story is light-hearted and lovey-dovey, and mine is a more tragic tale of someone whom the main cast cares about. I hope we succeeded.

Made me care about the characters. Sad to get to the end. Beautiful. Thoughtful. Descriptive. Entertaining. Thank you.:pinkiehappy:

Ah... poor Leon first his family was hurt, then he got PTSD, and now his mother is dieing... :fluttercry: :pinkiesad2: :raritycry:

The "part _ " are a bit jarring

428639 psst........... hey..........
Story is still great, even 3+ years later

Oh my god.... That's.... that's real life, right there. Geez.... :fluttercry:Well.... moving onto the next chapter. Maybe things will get better... and those bullies get what they deserve!!:twilightangry2:

Hm.... Seems someone has crush on the docter… :trixieshiftright::twilightsmile:

Ouch.... Nightmares.... They are the WORST! Leo.... :fluttercry: But I do wander about Twilight and Sunny, though.. I love the dynamic these two have! They're two very close who hang out in a completely platonic manner. *nods* :twilightsmile:

Wow.... WHY HAS NO ONE SEEN THIS STORY!!?? This story is more real that anything else I've seen! Bravo, my good friend. Here, have a spike :moustache:

Aw.. How sweet! :twilightsmile:

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