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Octavia and her childhood friend Allegro con Brio have grown distant ever since he moved away when they were thirteen. Now, caught in a dream, she must relive a series of scattered memories of him through the helpless eyes of an observer cursed with the gift of hindsight.

Tagging it as a "romance" fic seems a little inaccurate, but fairly close

First Published
28th Feb 2012
Last Modified
28th Feb 2012
#1 · 273w, 2d ago · · ·

That was really sad. Oh Octavia, you oblivious fool. :ajsleepy:

#2 · 273w, 2d ago · · ·

This is an exceptionally well written piece! I really like your portrayal of Octavia here and I definitely felt a manly tear coming on. VERY nicely done!

#3 · 273w, 2d ago · · ·

this is complete? sad story.

#4 · 270w, 5d ago · · ·

Spoiler Warning!

So, I'm assuming that Allegro con Brio was lying to Octavia in the cemetery when he said he had somewhere to go.  But how did he die in a motel room?  It couldn't have been of exposure. :rainbowhuh:

#5 · 270w, 2d ago · · ·

Wow dude, I am sickened that this only has 20 reviews. Thank you for writing this, it was both a pleasure and disturbing to read.

#6 · 268w, 1d ago · · ·

the tear dam is breaking again get the tape! :fluttershysad:

#7 · 267w, 5d ago · · ·

This story has significantly boosted my like for Octavia. I guess with a quiet pony such as her, it can be hard to tell the difference between snobby and sad. I guess I hadn't expected the latter up until now.

#8 · 266w, 3d ago · · ·

This was a beautiful read, you're great. So sad :pinkiesad2:

#9 · 264w, 5d ago · · ·

Oh man, finaly I get to read this.

Really tragic story... But beautiful the same time. A horrible prize for such a valuable lesson...:fluttershysad:

Great job dude!

#10 · 223w, 3d ago · · ·

Brio, you are a terrible liar. 'Tavi, you are a terrible friend. I hope you both feel ashamed of yourselves. Especially you, 'Tavi. Brio had one friend, just one it would seem, and you just had to smother her to death with apathy.

#11 · 205w, 3d ago · · ·

I really don't see how this has as few votes as it does, it was really good.  At least there aren't any downvotes.

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