Twilight's Revenge

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James Rye

James Rye #1 · Sep 18th, 2013 · 3 · ·

I hope Queen Twi kept her dick. And made it Queen-sized. XD

Can't wait what she has in petto for her friends and the princesses. <3

Evilpresident

Evilpresident #2 · Sep 18th, 2013 · · ·

Wow, that was a bit brutal, don't you think Twilight? But then again, what Chrysalis did to Twilight wasn't exactly nice either. Will we be seeing more of pony Chrysalis? Because I think her side could prove to be very interesting too

Have an upvote, since this story is relevant to my interests

snivyeeveeskyfan

snivyeeveeskyfan #3 · Sep 18th, 2013 · · ·

I need moar

Shakespearicles

Shakespearicles #4 · Sep 18th, 2013 · 2 · ·

*Queen of the Hove

bloodwolf432

bloodwolf432 #5 · Sep 18th, 2013 · · ·

Cool story bro, but you may want to take a read through it. There's a few grammar mistakes in it

Breath of Plagues

Breath of Plagues #6 · Sep 19th, 2013 · · ·

Unofficial to The Great and Bountiful Broadmare.

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So what you're saying is, you wrote more of the best clop I've ever seen?
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Saving for later but I look forward to this. I hope it's nice and sick.

JustThatGuy

JustThatGuy #7 · Sep 19th, 2013 · · ·

I got to see where this is going!

Lelouch Vi Britania

Lelouch Vi Britania #8 · Sep 19th, 2013 · 2 · ·

This pertains greatly to my interests. I also wouldn't mind getting a flashback as to how twi was caught and turned into a changeling in the first place.

Xaldon Ajide

Xaldon Ajide #9 · Sep 22nd, 2013 · · ·

I wonder if Celestia can Get through to Twilight before she takes over Canterlot? Not that it will stop the invasion but maybe mitigate the disaster, and keep pony's and changelings form getting hurt.

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