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Whoo!

Commence read!

by a strangle world-wise

Should be "strangely".

I prefer fucking fillies phonetically....but whatever

I've never read any of the ingress, (which i don't know what that word means, i must be dumb.) Also yeah great story! I'll have to read the others. Have a like + fave :)

Not bad at all, dude.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That was not sweetie bell

Kind of an odd ending considering 'changeling' was its own separate option. It does explain why "Sweetie Belle" was so aggressive about it though.

Burn it with Fire!

On the other hoof, what is it about Equestria that messes with human inhibition and sexual preferences? Twilight study session is called for.

3222147 It gave me an option to make sweetie belle aggressive and seduce a human rather than a pedophile human seducing sweetie belle. :pinkiesick:

3222206 I figured that was the reason.

You could've always gone with a grown-up Sweetie Belle route if you'd wanted. Alternatively, you could have also aged down the human by a few years since this does take place after Ingress by a couple years according to the story itself, so Sweetie would've most likely been a teenager by now.

Damn! Anonymous Pegasus has found one of my three literary weaknesses: Sweetie Belle clop!

I... didn't actually like this very much at all, and not because of the foalcon. There was a lot of telly language and very generic descriptions and little investment on my part.

Sorry man! I know this is probably one you just did real quick for fun or something of the sort.

it's strange, you used my real name... and uploaded this on my birthday. I thoroughly enjoyed this. :moustache:

Well...I guess, in a way, I got what I voted for. I think...?

So will this be a reoccurring theme?
Random mares (who are really the same changeling) that knows the human lure him in to seduce him until he walks off bowlegged?

Random changelings (who all keep taking on the same pony form) that knows the human lure him in to seduce him until he walks off bowlegged?

I'm fine with this. :pinkiecrazy::heart:

Human: All the ponies in this town are crazy! (And just buys another cooling pack for his groin)

Looking at how Shining Armor lost by only ONE VOTE, I kinda want to see a SweetiexShining clop :raritydespair::twilightoops::trollestia:

Tulip #20 · Sep 18th, 2013 · · 26 ·

Cursed pedophiles...

:raritycry: she would be so pissed

3223648 your pic says my feelings right now but with the gun in my mouth :rainbowlaugh:

If changelings are so good at manipulating humans, then why don't they all just move to Earth, and live with humanity?

3224023 they can only take pony forms duh

3224149 Watch the Supernatural episode on changelings and get back to me.

3224023 What's life without a challenge or two? Boring, that's what it is.

3224228
Because of your pic, I accidently read your comment in Obama's voice .__.

i clicked the view mature option...and this is what i see. they weren't kidding when they asked, "are you sure?"

3224023
They've seen enough movies and video games to realize that we fight off alien invasions for fun.

3225028
It wouldn't be an invasion, just a migration.

Foalcon should be a separate tag that people can filter out :pinkiesick:

Why would you even put Sweetie Bell's name on that poll in the first place?

Love it; INSTANT FAVE! :heart:

3224207 damn that got fucked up quickly :duck: though you do know I was talking about the ones from the show this entire site is based on right

Great read, was very interesting. Good job mate!

3225275 Yeah, buuuuuut I like to back up my opinions. :pinkiecrazy:

OK this is wrong cause its a man fucking a kid...but it just feels so right.it was amazing he should come back and fuck rarity and sweetie it would so great:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::twilightblush::twilightblush:and maybe starts to fuck the mane 6?

This literally made me happy.

Dohoho!
A bit of a...change in Sweetie Belle?
:3

I would totally want a changeling as a friend. Gives 'friends with benefits' a whole new meaning!

3223629 I don't think this counts as pedophilia. Kinky role playing perhaps...

.....WHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTT????????????????????????????????????????????????
HOLY SHIT, IS SWEETIE BELL A DEVIOUS LITTLE FOAL HOLY SHIT....
MAN THIS WAS SO....SO....IDEK WHAT TO CALL IT.
*AHEM*
now that i have that out of my system, i must comment on very..."intricate" storywriting. Despite this being clop, it had me going "WTF" the whole time. i read till the end, so something in your story was done well enough to keep me reading clop, which i honestly dont like doing. but good sir, you've kept enticed till the end, with a plot twist too no less.

3223629 3226867Ahh but she wasn't sweetie, The plot twist could be a completely different age, and she summed it up nicely, we are too easy because all humans and ponies are perverts, sum just hide it better then others.

Plus, you read the name, description AND STILL clicked it. Unless you just commented and left, you are one of us. :pinkiehappy:

And if you did really leave well that's just being a sad. :twilightsmile:

I knew as soon as I read

her horn glowing with a vivid, clear green light

that it was not Sweetie Belle.(even before I was suspicious)
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And if it wasn't obvious ^^^

3227184 Actually, Sweetie's magic is green. Same colour as her eyes. :trollestia:

:D......I like Chrysalis. :rainbowkiss:

Rarity should have walked in on them.

I regret nothing from this read!:pinkiesad2:

You should feel bad.

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