Every man that read this story was holding his balls as Twist kicked him. The chills it's sending up the spine are evil. Good this stallion is caught for good. And I think I see Shining Armor caring for him Sin City style. He took his weapons. All of them. Outch.
"If the inside sources that the Mayor and I came upon are correct, we're dealing with a sexual criminal named Pido. His crime... his obsession of little fillies.
Oh please don't tell me his name is Pido Phile
Comment posted by ServingSpoon deleted May 29th, 2016
Okay, first off.... OWWWWwwwwwww.......................... Felt that even from way over here...
Second, hellz yeah! Go Twist!
Awesome story, been here since chapter one. Cant wait for the next one. And also CRINGE FOR THAT NUTSHOT.
Every man that read this story was holding his balls as Twist kicked him. The chills it's sending up the spine are evil.
Good this stallion is caught for good. And I think I see Shining Armor caring for him Sin City style. He took his weapons. All of them. Outch.
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Oh please don't tell me his name is Pido Phile
BRAVO!
Nice shot
can't wait to see the final chapter
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Thanks for pointing that little mess up of mine. Guess I got confused at one point of the information.
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It's not, but I did purposely called him Pido for a reason.
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I'd be jumping for joy if that actually happens!
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I have noticed numerous errors in this fic, but even with the errors, it is enjoyable.
if you could use some help editing, I would be willing to help
Please don't let Time Turner/The Doctor be the rapist pedophile...
Ohhhhhhh... Twist may be small but, she's an earth pony so that nutshot definitely hurt...
As M. Night Shyamalan would probably say: "What a Twist!"
Pido... What a creative name. Lol