Good chapter once again. Still can't stop myself from laughing. Now to the three errors I found. Man I've got a good eye there or I would've missed them.
I quickly went after him shouting...
“W-w-w-wait a minute, Snails!”
I think it sould be Snips here. Little character swap.
He was really willing to try this experience out with him.
Either "I was..." or "...out with me" Snips trying it out with himself sounds a bit off in this situation.
he gave me one heck of a time today, and I wan't like ashamed at all.
You know... sex doesn't have to hurt the woman the first time. Most people think it will due to a misunderstanding of how the hymen works. Anyone writing any kind of smut (except m/m, I guess) should totally watch this video:
Good chapter once again. Still can't stop myself from laughing.
Now to the three errors I found. Man I've got a good eye there or I would've missed them.
I think it sould be Snips here. Little character swap.
Either "I was..." or "...out with me" Snips trying it out with himself sounds a bit off in this situation.
Wasn't. Just missed an s here.
Dragon
and now the foursome
Hehe, love how Snips gets a little more dominant in their rutting. Very nice!
more please
3929079 I think you mean "five-thome"
You know... sex doesn't have to hurt the woman the first time. Most people think it will due to a misunderstanding of how the hymen works. Anyone writing any kind of smut (except m/m, I guess) should totally watch this video: