Man-at-arms Terence and archer Ralf are part of King Henry V of England's besieging force at Harfleur. After a month of waiting and getting harassed by the French defenders of Harfleur, the English decide to assault the defiant fortress. A blast of lavender magic out of nowhere sends the two unfortunate soldiers off Earth and into Equestria. The pair end up in the Everfree forest, where they discover an underground network of Orcs planning to attack Equestria and claim the Equine land for their own.
Chapters (18)
Very good, very well done. While I'm a bit more interested in the Crusades, I can see this was well researched. Keep it up my good man.
man i can see lyra going all over
This I like this I realy like
I approve of this
3219590 Thanks!
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i like the authenticity of the enlishmen's vocabulary and grammer useage. also the plot seems pretty good so far
nice work so far, this makes me think of a book i read once. I'm not sure why though
3221164 i was inspired by the book Agincourt by Bernard Cornwell
3222058 hmmm, i actually haven't heard of that book, i was thinking of Lamentation by Ken Scholes
3222077 I should try that book out sometime
good so far
3222803 Thanks!
Still going strong
This is good but if you want to keep the langue period time then don't use the words shit darn it for those are more 1800s terms and shit wasn't a swear till early 1900s
P.s he punched apple jack in self defense.
3222828 you know i can't wait for pinkie pie to rub salt on them for being race, they just did the something with zecore.
Ohh i can't wait for pinkie pie to make everyone in town to feel like jackass jerks they are, that right there would make the fic and alot more batter in my book at less
3223985 well in their defense two large and armed strange creatures ran into town and then just overpowered a couple of guards
3224254 ya but they did not actack 1st the ponies did out of being racest like they did to zercroe
3224390 everybody would have heard when fluttershy screamed, i don't think you could blame them if they assumed something horrible happened and then those two run into town? sounds like a prime time to shit your pants and run
3223985 I was planning to do that actually, considering even TWILIGHT acted racist to them humans.
3223971 truth is they DID have the words "shit" which was originally written as schītte but due to me not being able to do the entire story in middle English, I had to force is some "modern-ness" and "damn" was already being used in the 14th century, they would, considering how pious everyone was in that period of time XDDDD
3224254 They only knew Ralf was armed after he had started to use the bow, as giving ponies' anatomy, they wouldn't be that "flexible" enough to nock an arrow and actually draw it without fouling the release, although there are ponies with bow cutie marks but that I still can't explain
Also chapter 5 tonight
3224616 Everypony's A Little Bit Racist, but they over did it
3224698 they recognized the sword though, i mean even if they only recognized that one thing as a weapon it's still one more weapon than you would probably like to see
3224811 A different looking Equine creature visits ponyville and every resident locks themselves in. From there I can infer that they reacted with great effect at an unfamiliar being, so would callong guards on two strange and armed creatures be overdoing it? XD
3224982 hmm... I guess you're right! :D
3226913 now i'm not saying they're not racist, it is your story after all, i'm just saying there could have been another motivation behind freaking out. Feel free to stick a pinkie pie guilt trip in
3226921 Got it!
3227124 errrr, not that you needed my permission
3227148 I know that! Just want to be friendly with fellow bronies
i like it, try writing longer chapters but apart from that good job looking forward to more
Not trying to sound mean, but this is the first time reading a story with such few views and likes, every one's gotta start, some where, right
? I'm new(ish) and I am very small still, so I know what it is like 
. a little busy writing and got a lot of stuff going on at this very moment, but I actually am looking forward to reading this small series, just be ready for constructive criticism 
3226905 ya, btw am still waiting for pinkie to rip there ass'es off for how raist they been.
3227549 Don't worry, it's comin'! XD
3227413 I'm always open for constructive criticism! :)
I've fallen and I can't get up what better way to use my time waiting for help
3227549 easy with that enthusiasm, sounds like you're out for blood
3229453 wut?
ok raretiy how about this your hair staly is out of date and your eyeliner is soo 1940s.
3232881 wow, that's a lot of aggression
3234693 hey i got all this anger build up inside me for so many yrs i have to let it out one way or the other, i mean i come from a family bleed line that is a warrior like race in laos mech with the peachful farming one that is know to show no anger on the outside but let it pass by like noting.
If you mix thos too you have me that is anger almost all the time but rarely show it unless your talking to me to know my inner anger, and i've been bolleting it for how long right now am almost 20 when i start holding it in i was like 8 so about let see here ( do some counting ) 12 yrs of build up anger inside me and being a geek thos yrs did not help one bit.
but thx to my old man and lady ( you know gampa ) give me somethings to work off that anger
basicly fighting things that are not alive, hunting for food, playing video games and talking about policle stuff like how stupid gun contarl is at times, and the people that make the laws never hold a fire arm once in his life.
3235132 hmm, maybe we just get angry over different things.
3235336 We do, I sometimes get angry over littering and get most angry when I see someone bullied. I often try to help.
3240613 i think "most angry" would be an amusing understatement if i saw that shit
3240630 Definitely.
will am staf great way for pinkie
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3244852 vot?