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TwiShy, AppleDash and Rarixie lover and writer. Also a gamer. Something else you need to know is that I'm strongly against Alicorn Twilight.


Applejack and Rainbow Dash have been more than friends for a month. To celebrate their anniversary, Rainbow Dash plans on showing Applejack just how much she means to her by helping her marefriend face her fears.
Inspired by Aladdin's Song A Whole New World and by the cover itself!
Cover by Ruhje

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 32 )

Enjoyable as always. I take it this is canon to Magic of Love?

3298531 Nope, this has nothing to do with the trilogy although it seems so, but thanks! :twilightsmile:
I would have said if it was canon to Magic of Love :raritywink:

this was a cute little story but i could really see it being so much more.

3298544 Sorry, but sometimes it is best if good stories are short :raritywink:

3298553 no question there

Dude it was a good fic /)

so they fell asleep on a cloud... I'm not questioning how you wrote it because its pretty great but what happens if Applejack rolls off of Rainbow while they're sleeping on the cloud? Then what?:applejackunsure:

You must have been writhing this in a gold mine because this is 100% pure gold. :ajsmug:
Keep this up and i will have to have a napkin with me every time i reed one of you'r story's. :twilightsmile:

This was so well written, and just beautiful. Give me more please! :raritycry:

This is the kind of story that makes me feel inadequate in every aspect of creativity. Your syntax and diction was beautifully used, and your descriptive language is definitely nothing to scoff at. :raritystarry: If there is any story I'd recommend for a good short, fluffy read, it's this one. Keep up the good work.

Very nice 'feel good' story bro, I'm all cozy and warm inside. Thankyou

that song is still copy righted? you know those things expire you should check.

3298764 Umm, she has the spell to walk on clouds :twilightsmile:

3299131 Thanks, but my editor helped me as always! :pinkiesmile:

3299705 It was copyrighted when I tried to upload it, so, yeah, I guess it still is... :applejackunsure:


In this case, it's still copyrighted. An original work doesn't go into public domain until after the author or artist's death and an additional seventy years have passed. (And this rule counts after January 1, 1978.) Basically, that song will be copyrighted for a pretty long time. :twilightoops:

(And this is straight from the U.S. Copyright Office's website, so it's legitimate. :twilightblush:)


I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news. I'm taking a Video Production class and we just learned all about copyright, fair use, and everything else concerning it. :fluttershysad:

3301071 It's OK, it's not your fault :raritywink:
I'll just have to write like this every time I need to use a song :ajsmug:

ADORABLE I NOW SHIP THESE TWO. *stamps shipping stamp* :ajbemused::heart::rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by TopazSapphireOC deleted Oct 5th, 2013

3303132 (MysteriousStranger) Lol FLUTTERSHY IZ HAPPEH!!! :yay: EVERYPONY IZ HAPPEH!!! :raritystarry: :twilightsmile: :scootangel: :derpytongue2: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss:

awww... that was so cute!!! i love it!!!:yay: yay!

That was a sweet story, the ending was just so romantic :twilightsmile::heart:

3342407 That was what I was looking for! :rainbowkiss:

Can you possibly ship these two? :pinkiehappy::heart::yay:

Sweet story. :twilightsmile: Very cute, to the point, nice ending. Good job. :raritywink:

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