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Another Army Brony


One of the few Bronies in the Army, I decided to try my hand at writing down my ideas. It's been over 4 years now, and I found that I enjoy this.


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My story begins where so many others end; with death. None are so familiar with death as I, For I have lived many centuries and died countless times. Untold dozens of lives have ended this same way; a slow decline in health, both physical and mental. This form fades away, my tenuous connection to this world slowly dwindling, like the last glow of a cooling ember. It is here that my tale diverges from the set way of things, for my ember does not simply fade to nothing. Quite the opposite, in fact. With a gout of flame akin to a solar flare, I burn to ash in excruciating pleasure. When the flames subside, I emerge from the ashes as a fledgling.

My name is Philomena.

I am a Phoenix.

And for her, I’d do it all again.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

3227775
I know, right? The whole idea came about while I was listening to a song, and my imagination began to wander. 2 days later, here we are. :twilightblush:

3227781 Not a bad thing! After all looking into the concept of immortality, especially with that of a Phoenix with many deaths and rebirths by fire is to say the least, a deep subject. I say well done! Very well done indeed!

3227788
Well, thank you kindly for that. If deep is what you're looking for, check out my story "my life as a receptionist in the afterlife". I warn you ahead of time, please ensure your feels are in the upright and locked position; it is going to be a bumpy ride.

huehue burd porn :trollestia:

Spacecowboy
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Friend pointed this out to me as relevant, as I've been on a tear writing some Philomena last week or so. I'll have to give this a read.

3229133

Awesome, hope you enjoy it. If you have any questions or feedback, don't hesitate to ask:twilightsmile:

Untold dozens of lives have ended in this same way;

Dozens? Was that intended, or am I not getting something here? Anyway, faved.

3232919
It was intended. You figure that Philomena has lived and died many times in the several thousand years she's lived

3234548
Heh, my bad. I guess I should have made that clearer
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3236968 No, it's good like this. I'm just a bit slow on the uptake sometimes. Please don't change it, it's really quite poetic.

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