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Iamnotabrony456


"The sane cannot comprehend the insane, and the insane cannot comprehend the sane."

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Fear. Sadness. Anger.

These negative emotions are responsible for many violent and immoral acts, words, and most importantly, thoughts.

When the Cutie Mark Crusaders perform a demonic ritual by accident when trying to study for school, they are stopped, but the damage is done.

What happens next, will be written in the dying words of history.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )
Comment posted by Iamnotabrony456 deleted Aug 18th, 2018
Comment posted by Iamnotabrony456 deleted Aug 18th, 2018

WELL THIS MAY OR MAY NOT BE INCREDIBLY DISTURBING. :pinkiecrazy:

3283995 it all depends on the vote my friend.Also, thx for the comment! :pinkiehappy:

3284034 .....No, not again. Dear god...... Ah fuck it.
Can You Feel The Sunshine? :twilightoops: For the sake of my waning insanity, I will like this fic, but I shan't read it. Forgive me. :fluttercry:

3284234 Thank you for you like and comment! If you don't want the story to be too violent, like the lost memory comment!

A quick scan reveals some rather intimidating walls of text, tense shifts, and a picture stuck right in the middle. Actually, that last one's just a pet peeve of mine, so you're probably okay to ignore it. You might want to do something about the first two, though.

3284416 thx for the review, I'll get on it soon. Also thx for reading, don't forget to vote!

please stop putting these in ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

3284868 the whole reason I did so was because the Messenger is a computer, therefore , it doesn't believe in the existence of equestria, so it is accepting it the only way it can, by stating everything hypothetically.

3283228 Awesome fic! I thought it had a great concept and the writing was good, too. I just think you should check your grammar as you're writing. Pretty much, you just missed some spaces and capital letters. Looking forward to seeing more from you. You just earned a follower!:raritystarry:

Love it!

.... Although..

You probably just gave me nightmares for another week or so.

:fluttershysad:

~Grr

3773394 Heh heh, that's what I intended. What do you think about another chapter?

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Another chapter would be awesome! Haha, I don't care about the fact that this creeped me out past expected, it's good to be a little scared sometimes.

Yay~ :yay:

~Grr

3775200 Did you see the new chap? Take a look and enjoy the cliffhanger!:twilightsheepish:

I love the chapter!

Thanks for not giving me nightmares this time! :rainbowlaugh:

I love the story, and just... Yes, I do not mind the quality, for in my head

everything is detailed.

EVERYTHING

Have a nice day or night. Hug?

~Grr

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Responses to sentences (in order)

Yay!

That will end soon.:pinkiecrazy:

Good.

EVERYTHING?

Thank you.

*hugs*

If you haven't seen my blog post, go read it. Anyway, MLD:ToE, is being put on hold until I get more inspiration. Any ideas?

an idea: several creepypasta characters are questioning tails dolls motives for traveling to another dimension, and when they see twilight! Some crap can go down

6696326 sounds neat, but what do you mean, some crap may go down? Explain?

Comment posted by Lingering_shadow deleted Dec 8th, 2015

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What I mean is that Twilight is an element of harmony, and we can both agree that creepypasta characters are not exactly the most harmonious dudes, so they do not take kindly to her presence and assault her, whether they do so verbally or phisically (no idea if I spelled that right. The one time I could actually USE autocorrect) is up to you

So, this is actually a really good start for an inexperienced author, though it reads a bit like a comedy, and I'm quickly assuming they will befriend the Tails Doll somehow...

This is an odd story, but certainly unique (and probably has a lot of potential if you were to treat it more comedically). I'm not sure why you stopped writing it...

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Lack of ideas, or rather, I should say, lack of good ideas. I wrote this while in my 'edgy' phase and liked Creepypasta. After the first chapters, I kept throwing ideas at the wall, and quite frankly, none of them stuck. In a way, I'm glad this story died, so I could possibly start another one later. I usually read stories, not write them, that being said, my unpublished stories, or rather story ideas are numerous and varied, I cant just find the motivation to actually work on them.

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