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The doctor has some tough choices to make and a final ultimatum that could decide the fate of miss ditzy doo. The problem is no matter what happens he will always care.


Hey guys this was supposed to be a one shot but I said screw it and cut it into chapters. Anyway i hope you enjoy this installment in the "This is who I am series". (Ps. before someone says that the beginning makes no sense please read further)

Id like to thank Fluffy shogun and rhysdmorgan for editing check them out!!!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 11 )

Well here it goes.

The story seems rushed.
Bad grammar everywhere.
And words that shouldn't be where they are.
That is my un-biased opinion.

My biased opinion.
like and fave. DoctorXDitzy forever:pinkiehappy:

But really, there is a writing guide, read it. And possibly find a proofreader.

:fluttercry: I am so sensitive to stories like these! WHY! Ugh well, I feel sad now. First of all because Derpy is sad and Second of all because there is currently only 3 chapters. Please update! Please! :applecry:

3456216 I am currently working on the story but it is not meant to be too long. It was going to be a one shot but I decided to spread it out between chapters. The conclusion is coming soon. :rainbowderp:

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Ok! I didn't mean to rush in anyway, I was just a little excited on how well the story is. I get really excited easily. But take all the time you need to write the story! I can wait! :scootangel:

3456560 Glad that someone likes it. :ajsmug: If you enjoyed it check out my other story.

D'Awww I absolutely LOVE this story! :pinkiehappy: IT WAS AWESOME!!! Good job! Keep writing! :derpytongue2:

3677783 Thanks :derpyderp2: I am glad you enjoyed it. If you have any suggestions on who I should do next feel free to pm me. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

“Have you ever had the laws of time and physics broken right before your eyes?”

Ditzy your eyes don't look in the same - um.. never mind

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