The doctor has some tough choices to make and a final ultimatum that could decide the fate of miss ditzy doo. The problem is no matter what happens he will always care.
Hey guys this was supposed to be a one shot but I said screw it and cut it into chapters. Anyway i hope you enjoy this installment in the "This is who I am series". (Ps. before someone says that the beginning makes no sense please read further)
Id like to thank Fluffy shogun and rhysdmorgan for editing check them out!!!
Well here it goes.
The story seems rushed.
Bad grammar everywhere.
And words that shouldn't be where they are.
That is my un-biased opinion.
My biased opinion.
like and fave. DoctorXDitzy forever
But really, there is a writing guide, read it. And possibly find a proofreader.
3213417 Good to know I'll work on my grammar.
I am so sensitive to stories like these! WHY! Ugh well, I feel sad now. First of all because Derpy is sad and Second of all because there is currently only 3 chapters. Please update! Please!
3456216 I am currently working on the story but it is not meant to be too long. It was going to be a one shot but I decided to spread it out between chapters. The conclusion is coming soon.
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Ok! I didn't mean to rush in anyway, I was just a little excited on how well the story is. I get really excited easily. But take all the time you need to write the story! I can wait!
3456560 Glad that someone likes it. If you enjoyed it check out my other story.
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I gladly will
D'Awww I absolutely LOVE this story! IT WAS AWESOME!!! Good job! Keep writing!
3677783 Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it. If you have any suggestions on who I should do next feel free to pm me.
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Will do!
Ditzy your eyes don't look in the same - um.. never mind