The memories I have should not be mine. Nopony can remember events from nearly two millenniums before one's birth. It is something ponies just know for themselves, we only know about the past through the stories left by those who lived through it. Yet I break through that fact. How? I do not know, but since I have them, I will use them.
In these memories, lie things lost from history. Ponies believe what they want, and they prefer fanciful tales over dark truths. They have lived these lies for so long it has become a truth, those who remember have given up trying to stop them from moving on. How can they keep trying to give the truth when even they do not want it to be a reality?
I might have gone with that. Obediently following what society says is the truth. But the forgotten has been returning. They will have to acknowledge that what they know is wrong. They will acknowledge the truth. If all goes how I believe it will, I might be able to give closure to a family about a murder. The first murder of Equestria.
Yet even with confirmations that my memories are true, I have doubts. I ask myself "Is this real? Or is this the ramblings of a, quite lucky, madmare?
*Author's note: Edits will be made as the show goes on, since new information can be added. The main character is an Alicorn OC, but please do not judge it by that.
I upgraded the content warning to teen because of the next couple chapters. There is no on screen sex but it is talked about, and I don't want people complaining.
Also, I made some visuals for the many OCs that pop up. Check them out if you're curious. http://keroberoscelestia.deviantart.com/gallery/51982526/My-Little-Pony-OCs
3207254 What did I say about coming her just for hate?
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3212849 apparently you can at least read, as you got past the first two sentences in the description.
I would like to ask though, why hate on Alicorn OCs? I say it is fine for an Alicorn OC to exist, as long as there is reasoning behind it other that "because I can".
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Mostly because they tend to be written by newcomers to writing and they normally end in shit, Plus, I've never seen a single story with an Alicorn OC be successful
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3212925 Have you ever read Past Sins? It is one of the more known stories with a great Alicorn OC.
I am a bit of a newcomer to putting my work here, but I have written some stuff before and I have thought out most of the story. It might not be "super amazing" in the end, but I hope it will at least be given a chance.
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If you want me to give it a chance I will, But expect a lot of Anti-Alicorn stuff in the review, Aight?
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It's not bad, but not great either, surprisingly good for an Alicorn story. Had a quick flick through and couldn't see anything wrong, so there's that.
Still won't be following along with it though :I
3217121 thank you for that. I was not expecting "oh my Celestia this is now the best thing ever and I take back all I said", but I am glad I got you to give it an actual chance and give fair feedback.
I am a bit sorry if I was a bit mean with my previous comments, I just... It bothers me when another judges something by one aspect without looking at the whole thing. That, and this FiMFiction account is mostly to test my writing abilities and seeing on what parts of that i shoul improve on before I begin writing things for my own series, so I really wanted some review on that part.
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I tend to be that guy that overreacts and loves to respond as negatively as possible
this is going really well, I like the idea of there being 7 Alicorns originally and how each one had her own element of harmony.
I also like what your doing with your OC, I see how mine is simular to yours a little but still really different. Keep up the good work.
3999277 thanks so much!
I don't know, I feel that you Discord's character right and I like how you managed to place your headcanons in to fit the story. overall good job.
Can't wait, this story is getting better and better. keep it up.
4845359 thank you! Discord is fun to write, but hard for me to feel like what I write is 'correct'. I can't wait to write more of him, but I have to get through a few more chapters. Hint: the next one is about holidays.
You are doing a very good job so far. Keep up the good work
4874094 Thank you!
i really enjoyed this chapter, glad to see you back on
5453305 Thanks! I had some laptop trouble for a few months. Basically my screen broke and then my cousin's fiance tried t download Mario 64 and got a virus on it that didn't let me use internet. I was using my mom's work laptop to type, but because of the programs she has to use on it, the only internet access I had was a very outdated version of Internet Explorer which barely played YouTube videos, much less let me update this. So I wrote a bunch of chapters, and finally got around to editing them for uploads.
On the bright side, I spent that time without internet access finding good bases to use to make visuals for all the OCs I put in here(I realized there's a lot). The link should be in the summary of the story by the time you read this.