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colt alchemist


Just a guy with ideas constantly popping out of my brain.

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Alice Liddell feels like she's losing her sanity ever since she visited Wonderland. She feels like she's slowly breaking down with madness. Her sessions with her psychiatrist, Dr. Bumby, doesn't seem to be working for her. All she wants to do is forget.

But, when a mystical mirror brings her to a mysterious new world filled with talking ponies, what will happen to her? What will she do, how will she get back, will she go mad? We're all mad here.

(Edited by RagingPonyRider)

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Yay! Alice: Madness Returns Crossover!

We are all mad my dear.

Alice casually wiped the knife clean with her dress before getting into a stance, smiling softly. “If I had a pence for every time I’ve been called that, I would have moved out of London years ago.”

DAMN. I really like this. MORE! :raritystarry::pinkiecrazy:

3296882 I'll upload the next chapter as soon as possible. There will be more Alice :pinkiecrazy:

I'm mad. Your mad. We're all mad here.

I love Alice crossovers. It takes a special kind of sanity to write stuff like this... that is, none at all. :pinkiecrazy:

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U R welcome

Oh Lord, this exists. :pinkiecrazy:
To the read-later list, with you!

Hmmm. Definitely curious at how this fic will turn out, but...

They both remained still, but then, a huge splatter of blood came gushing out of the guard’s neck. His body fell to the ground and his head rolled off. Shining was disgusted but he wasn’t going to give up, he ordered another guard to attack.
Adrenaline now coursing through her, Alice ran right up to him and left three huge slash marks on the guard’s chest. The blade cut through his armor and he was now bleeding to death. Shining Armor ordered a Pegasus guard to attack. The guard flew straight at Alice.
Alice then ran and used one of the guard’s dead bodies as a lift and jumped into the air. She landed her Vorpal Blade into the Pegasus guard’s face. They both hit the ground and Alice began to repeatedly stab the guard until his entire face turned red.
Before she could strike again, Shining Armor shot a magic beam at Alice, knocking her off the dead Pegasus. Alice got up, but pretty soon, she was surrounded by spears.
“What are you, mad?” Shining asked her, worry and fear evident in his voice as he took closer looks at the three

I mean, really? I would have thought that Shining would have backed off in fear. I certainly can't imagine him just shrugging off the death of a guard, then repeatedly sending others to take the fallen's places.
Of course, Alice arriving in Equestria may have disturbed some kind of balance, or maybe this world is just less innocent by principle. I don't know. But I hope that the (in my mind) out-of-character actions of Shining Armor can be explained at some point. It would be kool to see a "corrupted" Equestria similar to Alice's version of Wonderland.
I hope this updates soon, I'd hate to have given you my attention for no reason. :duck:

3638076 I'm more worried about the security of equestrian, as shinings plan boils down to, "send guards one at a time until no guards remain, or enemy gets tired"

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3956964 I fixed the error, narrowing it down to one.

i found alice: return madness on youtube it good idea to watch and copy it

Its good to see more Alice crossovers,i am eager for more chapters.

can you please continue this golden story? You made it very well!:pinkiesmile:

4967167 I've just been really busy lately. That and the amount of writers block. Don't worry, I plan to get the next chapter out ASAP

MUST. HAVE. CHESTIRE. Where would Alice be anyway without her smiling guide?

6413751 Sorry. It's just taking longer than I thought. With classes and personal things and stuff. Plus I had to replay the game to get Alice's personality correct.

Such a shame you didn't continue. And wright when I was starting to get into it.

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