Rarity just doesn't have any luck when it comes to finding her special somepony. Just some shipping nonsense I wrote for a contest. I hope you all like it.
Proofread by Triforce of the Gods, thank you again.
Cover art found here. All credit for the picture goes to the artist.
bu-but what about spike? wont he be devastated? or at least mad?
or is he over rairty in this?
sorry i had to be that guy...
i loved it anyway.
Im sorry... but I need to do this. Is Spike over Rarity? Because if he isn't... the greed rampage wont compare to this new one. Still liked the story.
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Bah, spike can go jump off a bridge. (He'd be fine don't worry)
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i really dont get the spike hate...
its stupid.
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Not exactly hate per say. He'd just kinda annoying and I'm tired.
That was a nice one shot.
Not sure what else to type, you can only say so much when there's only one chapter.
I have only one thing to say.
THIS IS WRONG: Eye's
THIS IS RIGHT: Eyes
3250193 Ah, I missed one! Curses, thought I got them all.
AWWW
Toast, you're awesome.
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Thanks.
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I'll fix that as soon as I get my laptop.
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Yeah, sorry, GNS is a very serious problem for me.
3330426 Don't be sorry ^^ If I ever catch everything when proofreading these, I'll be impressed with myself. I'm sure FlameingToast appreciates it too.
Rushed waaaay too much.
Nice little oneshot. The pace was a little too fast. When Rarity were cring, she then stoped and had a normal conversatoin with Twi. Maybe a little bit more self pitty would be appropriate.
None the less. It was a good read!
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Yeah, it was kind of rushed. It does seem to be a problem of mine. Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed it
Well wasn't that just so adorable.
i may have a small acing in my hart from reading that (happens every time i feel happy or sad so i have no idea what to feel. )
Phasing was not rushed or long winded it was at the right speed.
Characters very likable and in character to the show
A nice story over all 9/10
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Thanks for another awesome comment
I'm glad you liked it the story!
That was rather a cute story, although I think that ending was a bit too fast.
*Looks at comments* Okay, however you might feel about Spike, I don't see Twilight completely ignoring how Spike feels
For all that I'm not a fan of Spike/Rarity seeing as Spike has never, in the show, indicated an interest in Rarity beyond her looks.
well that was cute but i think you rushed the ending...
A moment of cute fluff, works for me.
Loved this want more
Who's here cuz of this audio read?