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FlameingToast


NO LONGER POSTING: love you all goodbye, and remember to never stop stop shipping cute things <3

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Rarity just doesn't have any luck when it comes to finding her special somepony. Just some shipping nonsense I wrote for a contest. I hope you all like it.

Proofread by Triforce of the Gods, thank you again.

Cover art found here. All credit for the picture goes to the artist.

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Comments ( 24 )

bu-but what about spike? wont he be devastated? or at least mad?
or is he over rairty in this?
sorry i had to be that guy...
i loved it anyway.

Im sorry... but I need to do this. Is Spike over Rarity? Because if he isn't... the greed rampage wont compare to this new one. Still liked the story.

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Bah, spike can go jump off a bridge. (He'd be fine don't worry)

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i really dont get the spike hate...
its stupid.

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Not exactly hate per say. He'd just kinda annoying and I'm tired.

That was a nice one shot.
Not sure what else to type, you can only say so much when there's only one chapter.

I have only one thing to say.

THIS IS WRONG:twilightoops:: Eye's

THIS IS RIGHT:pinkiehappy:: Eyes

3250193 Ah, I missed one! Curses, thought I got them all.

Toast, you're awesome. :twilightsmile::heart::duck:

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Thanks:twilightblush:.
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I'll fix that as soon as I get my laptop.

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Yeah, sorry, GNS is a very serious problem for me.:pinkiesick:

3330426 Don't be sorry ^^ If I ever catch everything when proofreading these, I'll be impressed with myself. I'm sure FlameingToast appreciates it too.

Rushed waaaay too much.

Nice little oneshot. The pace was a little too fast. When Rarity were cring, she then stoped and had a normal conversatoin with Twi. Maybe a little bit more self pitty would be appropriate. :raritywink:

None the less. It was a good read!

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Yeah, it was kind of rushed. It does seem to be a problem of mine. Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed it:pinkiehappy:

Well wasn't that just so adorable. :yay:
i may have a small acing in my hart from reading that (happens every time i feel happy or sad so i have no idea what to feel. :rainbowhuh:)
Phasing was not rushed or long winded it was at the right speed. :ajsmug:
Characters very likable and in character to the show :raritywink:
A nice story over all 9/10 :twilightsmile:
:duck: :heart: :twilightblush:

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Thanks for another awesome comment:scootangel:
I'm glad you liked it the story!

That was rather a cute story, although I think that ending was a bit too fast.

*Looks at comments* Okay, however you might feel about Spike, I don't see Twilight completely ignoring how Spike feels :twilightsheepish:

For all that I'm not a fan of Spike/Rarity seeing as Spike has never, in the show, indicated an interest in Rarity beyond her looks.

well that was cute but i think you rushed the ending... :fluttershysad:

A moment of cute fluff, works for me.:ajsmug:

Loved this want more :heart::heart::twilightsmile:

Who's here cuz of this audio read?

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