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JoeBobWhitney


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This takes place after the non-canon Evil Karma ending of inFamous 2

Conduits. People with superhuman abilities, ranging from manipulation of a certain form of energy or matter, to flight, enhanced senses, and strength or other physical enhancements. Once a simple bike courier, Cole MacGrath, was one of them. He possessed immense control over electricity, boasting the ability to summon a gigantic bolt of pure lightning from the sky.

After defeating Kessler, who later revealed he was Cole from an alternate future and told him about the Beast, a powerful Conduit who threatened all of mankind. One month later after, Cole met up with NSA agent, Lucy Kuo. Kuo knew of "the Beast" and in fact, found Cole to help him prepare to fight it. She knew only one person who could help Cole combat the Beast. Dr Wolfe. He was one of the many scientists who helped make the Ray Sphere and had made an anti-Ray Sphere titled the Ray Field Inhibitor. The device, however required the power of seven Blast Cores. Cole, with this knowledge, headed out to go find them.

It was then later revealed that the Beast was a old friend of Cole named John White. He was unable to kill John because he simply did not want to and sided with him when he told him he could activate Conduits. In the end, he was forced to kill one of his friends, Nix and Zeke - his closest friend who stuck with him even in the darkest times. A month later after his death, regret fills his broken heart and gives way to depression.

However, due to an odd colored Blast Core that he and Kuo found in the wall, he ends up in another world with Zeke. This world is cheery, colorful and filled with technicolor ponies. Shit.

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 73 )

A little rushed, but good nonetheless.

3219824 Thank you for your input. I really do need it. :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by JoeBobWhitney deleted Oct 6th, 2013

Author's Note, I completely agree.
I just hide in a corner and hope no one notices me in that scenario.

This seems a bit rushed. Take some time to flesh out the story. Show, don't tell.

gave electricity scarlet off.

Reverse these two words, then thou shall be good.

3223446
This. Other than the pacing issue I've enjoyed your story.

all i got to say is ...DUFUQ? XD that was one of the most damnable, and funniest, things i have ever read! Spelling and grammar are sub-par but the story as a whole has quite a bit of potential! and truest me, i know that kid of story when i see it! Now just continue writing and you will have me as a fan :pinkiehappy:

Downvoted for poor grammar.

Fuck you, I'm not good at jokes.

Actually, yes you are, because I'm fairly certain my sides just touched down on Mars.

You've gone a bit overboard with the bold text, but otherwise, I like it. Also...

3263775 If you can't say it in a helpful, constructive manner, don't say it at all. I'll agree that there are some grammar issues, but there's no call to be an arse about it.

Comment posted by JoeBobWhitney deleted Oct 2nd, 2013

Yeah!!! SEQUEL!! Reform Discord.......do it.......

3293227 What you just said. I've already formed many thoughts. How I will execute will be most intriguing. :raritywink:

3293251 .........YES.......Awesome.......

i think rainbow d is in luv:eeyup::ajsmug::rainbowwild:

Fabien? Cheating wife? FRENCH?! Gta V reference? :pinkiehappy:

3304922 it is nodicesable in the text i read, though a certain thing will come in and out in repeat :raritywink::scootangel::rainbowlaugh:

3305236 I'm surprised you caught that. Good job. :twilightsmile:

nay shiny is a bit more of a bitch than you made him here

3305790 Thank you. I take pride in my slight OCD'S tendency to have me remember every little fact about a video game. :rainbowlaugh:

Awww Yeah!! I can tell this is gonna get better and better. How long do you plan on making this, BTW?

cages cant they just turn into a snake or something

3317011 That is the point, good sir. They're gonna escape anyway.

3317152what about a rat, bat, fly, or a freaking flea

but they are probably to stupid to think of that

seruisly attacking cole he already beat discord why the hell would you fight him with nothing to help you other than a little backup

3311939 That I'm unsure of. Maybe.... 25 to 30 chapters? And then a sequel? I still got plenty of ideas but I feel as if I won't execute them properly.

YEAH!!! I smell a Cole shipping with someone. JUGGALO APPROVED!!! Not Luna..... best pony is reserved for Canon characters. :ajsmug:

When is Discord coming back? We're all waiting :applecry:

don't deny it i know there is more badass-ness coming:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::rainbowwild:

I cannot, for the life of me follow the story, its logic, and the weird timeline. Sorry, I just can't.

AHH!! You ass, you had my hopes up! I can imagine the smug look on your face right now. :twilightblush:

Comment posted by JoeBobWhitney deleted Oct 12th, 2013

I'm not liking where this shit's headed I like Discord. :pinkiesad2: You made Pinkie sad, I hope yer happy. Asshole.

3344232 Trust me, you'll like it in the end. Fuck it, you deserve spoilers, he's not dead. He will be with them in the end. After all, aren't gods immortal?

SEQUEL!! I'll try and leave less annoying comments next time. Or at least on EVERY chapter. :pinkiehappy::ajsmug::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::twilightsheepish::yay: MANE 6 SMILES!!

well?? less bitching more hitching:twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:

Now you have to do one from the good ending as well, that lightning was very *Looks around* Surspiciouso

:pinkiesmile:Good Show my boy!

...However I do have one question. What happened to Zeke and Kuo? Last time I saw them in this story they were almost dead. Are they going into the sequel, if so...:applejackunsure:how?

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