Couples go through rough patches all the time. But what do you do when you have two marefriends, and you know you're bad with words?
This was written for the polyamory challenge over in the Shipping Discussion Group.
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That was too cute. I'm not usually a fan of ApplePie or PinkieDash, but this is a great balance, and manages to get across the really cute things about both of those ships while smoothing over the rough edges. And, of course, I never have to be convinced about AppleDash, and that's just as sweet here.
Very good work. You should be proud.
Cute, fluffy, and very, very good.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Thank you.
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I wasn't before, but after hearing you two... I kind of am!
oh ma gawd, so cute!
Cute.
Question: "Couples go through rough patches all the time. But what do you do when you have two marefriends, and you know you're bad with words?"
Answer: Get out the baking equipment, set the over on apparently 180º Celsius, get out the ingredients for a pie, make the crust, ready the filling for said pie and bake a big-ass pie for you and your marefriends to share after a particular intense threesome that goes on for approximately 3 hours +/- 30 minutes depending on size of pie and appetite of threesome participants.
Protip: Do not listen to Leaving Earth from the Mass Effect OST while reading, unless you enjoy reading through blurry vision.
Interesting pairing choice as well.
That was some of the best Pinkie writing I've sen in a while.
Bravo!
You just set the AppleDashPie bar really high. I am frightened regarding my own attempt.
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I was frightened about this story
It's usually better than we think it is.
I never would have thought of those three together but it kind of makes sense and it worked nicely here. A cute snugly story good job
Cute. I liked it a lot.
Aww. This is very sweet.
Tying this into Last Roundup was an interesting choice, and it really paid off. I'd be curious to know how you got the idea. It made the conflict feel much more real than perhaps if you'd manufactured something entirely on your own, and definitely helped me swallow what would have otherwise seemed like an unlikely relationship. And yeah, this was really, really cute.
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It's hard for me to figure out where it snuck in. It just kind of... happened.
"Polyarmory"?
I guess that's what Celestia had to practice in the past when there were wars happening
That was one of the cutest things I think I've read on here
no couple or group partnership will ever be smooth sailing the whole way through, but there were a couple of really low blows sneaked in there. I never considered Dash to be the mediator in this setup, but it was really handled well 
passionate kisses appear to soothe savage tempers. I'll bear that in mind.
Smart idea setting it as part of the show continuity, rather than standing alone, because I felt AJ and Pinkie still had to work that out properly between themselves.
Also pouncing
Oh my god. I love this ship so much! I'm so glad I'm not the only one! This is too cute! I love it!
Something about multipony ships just make me have warm fuzzies inside. Must be all the fluff. This was really beautifully done. It feels very true and in character to everyone and is a beautiful look at things.