I really love your stories

3714207 Thanks! I really appreciate any support

YAY! An update!

glad you are back and awesome chapter by the way, what a great new years present!

3715626 Thanks I had a lot of fun writing it. It felt different though. Could you tell anything different in the quality compared to the rest of the chapters?

3716018 The A.I. has become a chringe-inducing cliche.

3716018 unlike 3717070 , i thought that what you did with the AI was good, it gave her a little more emotion, she cares for Jake, she is not just a mindless tool but a character in the story. you are doing a great job!

3717402 Thanks for the support.

3717070 The meaning of that word is it has been over used so much to the point it has lost it's meaning.

Definition: is an expression, idea, or element of an artistic work which has become overused to the point of losing its original meaning,

Please tell me how the A.I. (Who is basically a CHARACTER in the story now) Has become over used and lost meaning? She actually will have a lot to do in the story and is important to the very core of what he is doing. Fix the ship, and warn his people. He can't so that by himself. I gave her emotion so you can feel what she feels when something happens. Not just some emotionless robot that speaks to you... I'm not getting mad at you... I just wish for you to give me a little more information...

3717667 You are welcome!, always love to give my input! :)

A few munutes later...

"Retreat!" he yelled while running towards the forest again.

3718273 Bahahahahaha!

3718273 I'm actually writing the next chapter now... around 1600 words. Should be released very soon.

"You can't fall asleep, that is one of the worst things to do with such a bad concussion as you have."

The Myth of falling asleep with a concussion again! Why is it everywhere?
http://uamshealth.com/healthlibrary2/medicalmyths/sleepingwithaconcussion/

That's what I said, why the fuck didn't you wait for your armor! Couldn't wait just 3 hours!!! That dummy. Xp