I like the idea of explaining the events leading up to the somehow appearing in equestria part of these kind of stories. Especially when the events are awesome. xD

What the hell was that.

pretty good, though I would combined some chapters. People prefer less pumped out large chapters than quick pumped out short ones. LIke, 1.5k words is where your good, though close is pretty good. This story has potential, just needs more.... words

3325674 I don't know what you mean....

3325457 Thanks!

3328125 LOL MAN YOUR AWESOME :D THUMBS UP FOR U! AND A FAVORITE >:D

Ps. i'm gonna stalk u with princess moluna and princess molistia

Am I the only one who got flash backs to Mass Effect with the limping Sheppard here?

Plasma grenades....mmmm, do they stick

"Insufficient power." Voiced the weapon as Jake shouted out a few choice words

Don't you just hate it when that happens at a clutch moment?

Getting me hooked into this story without even having ponies for the first three chapters is quite an accomplishment. Think you'll ever be continuing this one?

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Oh for sure. I left it at a spot I felt like was okay for it to be as I worked on the final act. I wanted it all to be, well, ready.

Plus, I've spent most of my time on my other story Fall of the Lich King which is... pretty much the same length as this one now I guess LOL.

Anyway, thanks for checking out my stuff, don't mind if there's some chunkiness in the early chapters... it gets better I promise they're old