Due to a failure of the ponies who lived before Equestria, a spacial alignment that would normally be nothing, instead opens up a portal to an alternate dimension which is home to a world that's inhabitants are the exact opposites of the ponies living in Equestria. As an attempt to stop the evil ponies within this alternate universe from destroying the wonderful world of Equestria, Celestia sends in an A team to hold down the world for the three years the portal will remain open.
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I did not make it, all credit for the picture goes to aeroyTechyon-X on deviantart.
Chapters (5)
Good story.
I wait for more.
This is really good so far. I can't wait to see how everypony will react to this news!
I enjoy this so far...
go on...dont make me disappointed...
Sounds good, I will wait till it's complete. Take your time
Part owl and part bird ... isn't that just ... an owl?
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Birds and owls are different or at least in what I was seeing when I made the monster they were.
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I'll take your word for it, but maybe some extra description would be a good idea, since an owl is in fact a kind of bird.
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OK, well I'm only 15 no biology master :p. I might add some in later, or just do something in incoming chapters.
Interesting.... tracking
Curses! Evil mirror universe counterparts? How did you know my weakness? Tracking.
Great minds must think alike, cuz I had a similar idea recently
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Owls are birds.
If a creature has feathers, it's a bird (with the obvious exception of imaginary and mythical creatures).
Possibly first?
Also, I think the characters are a little OOC at some points, such as using words they wouldn't normally. Still a good chapter nonetheless, though!
EDIT: Yes, first!
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If that's the case its only because I'm still new at writing. Practice makes perfect.
366965 Don't get me wrong, it was still a good read, and I eagerly await more chapters! And also, you misuse "there" with "their" a lot.
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Ya my English teacher tells me the same thing. Along with other stuff, like my terrible spelling. I love how this site has spellcheck on it!
Hmm... Tracking was good... Let's see where this goes...
This chapter is really short because it should have been added onto the last one, but it wasn't because I'm stupid.
Those 450 words saved me from a couple minutes boredom. Couldn't have had better timing sir!
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Yup, I'm just psychic like that. Your welcome for screwing up!
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You don't mess with Fluttershy.
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Oh ya I forgot about that, I will change that!
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I could tell you whether you are right or wrong, but I'm not sure if anypony would think that a spoiler.
Behold the perfect theme for FluttershyX http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfy5W8AJqIY&feature=related
Ending of chapter =
She's screwed.
*reads the part where Twilightx suggested to go meet Fluttershyx* IT'S A TRAP!!
reads the final line..... TOLD YOU!!
after all.... if Twilight is an egghead with poor conversation skills then her counterpart must have great conversation skills thus allowing her to convince ponies..... she must be one hell of a salespony..... public relations Twilight? buck yeah......
ponies don't need to be cruel or mean to be evil.... just follow dark ideals...
sneaky...
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Oh yes she is
She is sooooooooo dead
And the discription of pinkie