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Dark Colt Sabata


Common ideas executed weirdly, if inspiration and motivation strikes.

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Button Mash locks himself up after finding out that he's "possesed" by an "evil spirit". After getting an explaination of this evil spirit, he's convinced to let himself out. However, it is only the start of his own adventure, his bizarre adventure.

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A/N: Button and most of the foals are teenagers in this fic. And before I forget, this is a crossover with part 3, but there will be some changes here and there.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Where have I seen this before...

:trollestia:
That is all. Equestria is ours.

:rainbowwild::derpytongue2:

It might be because I have no earthly idea about what you're crossing over, but this just isn't my cup of tea.

The first problem though, is the pacing, everything just moves from one thing to the next without really giving the reader much time to digest.

Next off is the descriptions, to which I give an 'eh', I didn't really get a feel for any of the characters, other than Button's Mom possibly being a sociopath. Seriously, she was creepy.

Once again though, it's probably due to my not being familiar with the crossed-over work.

3394541 To be honest, I too want to see how I handle that. :rainbowlaugh:

Most of the stand users will be ponified btw.

Looking forward to the next chapters. :D

Also, Stand using Earth Ponies would be something to fear, maybe not as much as Stand using unicorns or Stand using Pegasi, but they would definitely be on more equal ground.

small error, moms name is Milano (yes, like the cookie) you goofed a little bit.

Comment posted by Generic Valkyrie deleted Mar 10th, 2014
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