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With the death of Scootaloo already taking its toll on the town of Ponyville, times are about to become much harder when another death rocks the small town. [Fan made fic based on Final Dreams of a Filly]

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Damn this is one sad story.

:rainbowdetermined2: love it!!!!:applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry: rainbow and scoot are ddddd oh they were sutch sweet hearts :ajsleepy::ajsleepy: :raritydespair::raritycry::rainbowderp::pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::derpytongue2::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::facehoof::moustache::eeyup::twilightoops::twilightangry2::raritydespair:

is this a fan sequel to Final Dream of a Filly?

266523 Or any of the other stories that has Scootaloo die. Poor Filly, seems to be the victim whenever someone needs one.

Very sad but helps me.
Good writing skills.

266564
You make is seem like a murder plot may be involved or something...meh. -shrugs-

266983 I didn't mean for it to be. I'm just saying without looking, I've read 3 different stories about Scootaloo dying, I mean, I thought people loved Chicken!

266991
Wait...that's RIGHT! People DO love chicken! CASE CLOSED!

267017
Why is Scootaloo called chicken?!?!?

Thanks for all the support, guys!

267279
It was from whatever episode it was that--fuck it, I'll link you.

...or just quote it:

"Scootaloo is a Chicken is a common phrase due to an episode in which Scootaloo is called out for being afraid while looking for chickens, and then while calling them her name is yelled in order to 'find a chicken.'"

Source: This.

Sad story for sure :fluttercry: but it's a great story! Keep it coming.

268136

Will do! Currently developing chapter 3, and I'll likely have it up before Saturday! :twilightsmile:

268201

Thank you, looking forward to it!:pinkiehappy:

So many tears. I cant hold all of them in my eyes. :fluttercry:

IT
REALLY
HURTS! :raritycry:

272674

Do you mean that in a good way? :twilightblush:

I Know what this is a sequel too now, I just don't remember its name. I was confused at first because I read two scootaloo dies fics, where Rainbow Dash blamed herself for.

EDIT: Okay..I'm dumb, its in the description :twilightsheepish:

good story.

272799 Of course! :pinkiehappy:
It was so sad but so good. It was both :fluttershysad:
All i can say is
dash.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/132440564370.png

The end made me cry hard! At least Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash will be forever together in heaven. It was a terrifically written story! I will favorite this.

275924


Thanks! Had a hell of a time trying to tie the end together, but I guess it worked :twilightblush:

Beautiful, just like Final Dream of a Filly.
Very, very well done

273064 I couldn't wake you because you could never wake up again

well Im really sad now :fluttercry: soooooo
I guess I need to go play happy wheels :pinkiehappy:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :fluttercry:

To many tears :raritycry::fluttercry::applecry:

oh dear. I'm going to try to not cry again today. 2 sad fics already got to me.. but not this one. Come on.. no.. NO! Stop it, eyes! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?? NOOO!!!! :fluttercry:

So what exactly killed scootaloo?

505400

Well, if you're too lazy to read Final Dreams of a Filly :ajsmug: *wink wink*

She dies of Hypothermia in the cold of the CMC clubhouse.

505410 Oh... I can't take anymore of scootaloo dying. I'm already reading one sad fic where she gets cancer.

505422

Well this one isn't just about Scootaloo, so if you can't take anymore, then I don't suggest reading further. I welled up a tiny bit writing this. :pinkiesad2:

Noooo damn you! I cried again. That is the third time today from a scootaloo related fic. :fluttercry::fluttercry::applecry: Stop making me cry, people! argh!:raritycry:

505521

I warned you :eeyup:

505533 Great... now I get to sleep on this. I swear to god if I have a nightmare where Scootaloo dies, I know who all to blame. Also, that will be one of the few nightmares (other than Pinkamena) that I actually consider to be scary. If I have a dream about zombies or something, I enjoy that stuff so it is more of a fantasy than a dream. :ajsmug:

505566

Sad nightmares are the worst.

505576 Yep.. they are also harder to lucid dream during because emotions get tangled in there. Well.. I'm off to bed nao. if I wake up crying, I blame you.

505586

Sorry man, it's what I do. :moustache:

This is the fourth story in the past 2 hours that involve Rainbow either dying or getting hurt, this story deserves its own episode, or movie, or series OR SOMETHING ITS SOO SAD ITS GOOD! -Sobs like Pinkie Pie- :pinkiesad2: :fluttercry: :raritycry:
Oh and it would be 10% better that 1,000,000,000,000% if you stated how the other ponies coped with the death.

520632

I'm thinking about rewriting it, but longer. I have a lot of projects I need to finish first, however. And thanks for the positive feedback! :twilightsmile:

So sad and yet beautifully uplifting. I'm so glad I read this.

Wait, did Rainbow's soul replace the Rainbow of Scootaloo's heaven?

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Instead of Scootaloo's and Dash's souls living in seperate heavens, they were joined together in one, so that they could be reunited for eternity.

Wow, lot of views on this story. Almost as many as a featured story. :pinkiehappy:

I'm still baffled that this story has no dislikes :rainbowderp:

505400 This is solemmly based off the fan-fic Final Dreams of a Filly, In that story Scoots Dies of Hypothermia.

I cried when I read this. I was really sad when pinkie pie broke down and cried but it kinda did have a happy ending. Rainbow dash gets to spend the rest of her life with her number one fan. Amazing story. :twilightsmile::heart:

"I couldn't wake you, because you could never wake up again." The life of a young filly is extinguished before its time. Both of these story's were amazing and sad. Ahhhh... Another well written story.

912266

Don't be. The reason it has no down votes is because it is a beautifully written sad story.

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Glad I scrolled through the comments, I was about to post that. I just read that one for like the 8th time. :raritycry::fluttercry::pinkiesick:

God am I going to cry even more than I did during Final Dreams of A Filly? Stupid tears :fluttercry:

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