The Wheel and the Butterfly A Dan X Pinkie Pie Saga

by Justice3442

Part 3 Pinkie Vs. Daily Life: Epilogue

The Wheel and the Butterfly

A Dan X Pinkie Pie saga

Part 3 Pinkie Vs. Daily Life

Epilogue

-oooooo-

“…And that’s when Captain Jack Tatterson, armed with his Death Ray Gun, blasted all the evil Blorg into--”

“NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRD!” Twilight yelled at the mirror.

“Wait, what?” Dan asked, his train of thought thoroughly derailed.

Twilight Sparkle closed her eyes and gave herself a proud smile.

“Why you little…purple…uh…sparkly...”

Dan heard some rustling as a soft, warm body pressed against his back and a feminine hand with nails painted pink reached over his own body into view.

“Tag up,” Pinkie said.

Dan spun his body on the mattress to face his roommate, his face mere inches from hers. “But she…”

“Dan,” Pinkie began in a tired tone, leveling equally tired sky-blue eyes at him, “we’ve been up for almost two days watching videos and talking to everyone in Canterlot and you’ve been picking on her non-stop.” Pinkie gave Dan a pleading look. “Let her have this one, pleeeease?”

Dan folded his arms and looked away. “FIIIINE!” he huffed out as he flicked Pinkie’s hand.

Pinkie pressed against Dan slightly as she reached over to grab the mirror off its pillow perch. She laid back on her own pillow and held the mirror above her. “Goodnight, Twilight,” Pinkie said with a yawn.

“Goodnight, Pinkie.” Twilight said with a smile, adding a “Goodnight, Dan,” with an eye roll.

“Night, Sparkler.” Dan mumbled.

Pinkie smiled to herself and closed the compact mirror. She placed the mirror on the side of the bed, lightly tapping it against the crate that served as part of the fort wall.

The fort immediately collapsed in on itself, burying the occupants in blankets, cushions, and throw pillows to the sound of a startled cat.

“Pinkfie?” Dan called out, with a muffled voice.

“Yeah, Dan?”

“I thwink it’s twime we put bwack the fwurnitwure…”

Pinkie sighed. “I know, Dan.”

“Good…bwut furst please help pry Misster Mumble owff my fwace.”

“Merrrow…”

End Part 3

Author's Note:

Thanks for reading!

Comments

[fedback]

somehow....i really liked this...even if this was so short...it kind of left an impression

[eternalone898]

And now we play the waiting game yet again. But also I'm sure it will be worth it in the end.

[dukesofhazzardftw]

heh

[Spanner]

lightly tapping it against the crate that served as part of the fort wall.

This isn't a mistake, but you could replace fort wall with forth wall.

[LightningBass94]

Pinkie was certainly getting intimately close with him, and I don't think the fort had anything to do with that.

[MythrilMoth]

“…And that’s when Captain Jack Tatterson, armed with his Death Ray Gun, blasted all the evil Blorg into…”

“NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERD!” Twilight yelled at the mirror.

Payback's a bitch...and so is Twilight!

Pinkie smiled to herself and closed the compact mirror. She placed the mirror on the side of the bed, lightly tapping it against the crate that served as part of the fort wall.

The fort immediately collapsed in on itself, burying the occupants in blankets, cushions, and throw pillows to the sound of a startled cat.

I was WONDERING what would be the final nail in the coffin!

Corrections:

Twilight sparkle

Capitalize 'Sparkle'.

gave herself a proud smile

Missing period at the end.

“Tag up.”

Period should be a comma.

mere inches from hers,

Comma should be a period.

Pinkie gave Dan a small, pleading look,

Drop 'small', and the comma at the end should be a period.

and looked away,

Period.

“Goodnight, Twilight.”

Period should be a comma.

“Goodnight Pinkie.”

And again.

“Goodnight Dan.”

And again.

“Night, Sparkler.”

And again.

Pinkie sighed,

Comma should be a period.

[KiaraGate]

Right, really enjoying this story. Hilarious and heartwarming at times.

At this rate I shall have this read in less than six days!

[Hesitant Brony]

3878088
Pinkie does tend to tap that alot too.
don't take that out of context.

[Justice3442]

4357035

Short and sweet and done. Thank you.

[Delta_Escher]

Coincidence: Read this right after watching Dan vs. Chris

[Sunbrony01]

4364076 I'd tap dat too

[Dustchu]

Hehehehee, short but nice!
Good show.

[Dan50]

LOVING this story!!!!!!! Bee reading it for the past 2 or so days!!!!!

[Flisky]

I need to find my it again.